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My Servant System

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Katherine Zara, a single middle aged office worker, went about her day as she always had; wake up, go to work, come home and read or play games. However, today would be different. Before she left for work, her ex broke into her apartment and killed her. When she woke up, she was given many choices. She could pick her new world, pick her starting point, and pick her system among many other things. And so Katherine decided to become a servant to a villainess. Follow Katherine as she serves her petty, demanding mistress in a world of swords and magic. Additional: The Female Lead (Katherine) will be submissive to her mistress, but will be cold towards others. I plan on having some action, but mainly this will be a story about Katherine serving her mistress and leveling up her system.

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Sako_6179
Sako_6179Lv4Sako_6179

I see Yuri and I see potential yandere. Speak no more im in ;3................................................................................................................

Gozilo
GoziloLv1Gozilo

very good story , l love yuri and this one is good , a little sad to see a harem but l love so it's not a problem , thank for this story . ...

Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14Raven_Master

just my opinion I really can't stand it sorry I tried at least bye

Reddragon34
Reddragon34Lv14Reddragon34

Already loving this book!! Interesting concept and excited to see where this story takes us in the future!!! Cannot wait for more chapters!!

Panda_Stories
Panda_StoriesLv14Panda_Stories

Write Quality: basic with no flare or anything original in it - 3 stars Story development: slow where it shouldn't be and fast-paced where more could be included - 2 stars Character design: plain and basic with everyone cut from the same card - 2 stars World background: Basic fantasy - 3 stars Personal opinion: led around by the nose from the start by a child, the main character doesn't show the emotional intelligence of an adult who has had dozens of physical relationships and instead acts like pre pubescent boy who has seen a naked body for the first time.

Anastasia_Ruwan
Anastasia_RuwanLv4Anastasia_Ruwan

Great book . ... Please ... PLEASE make Kat grow dig Bick . .I don't care where she gets it but I rlly want her to top Leone or Anput I beg of you author. .. .I CAN NOT REST WITHOUT IT. Any ways keep up the good work

LumineSu
LumineSuLv2LumineSu

why are all your characters submissive? I like to be submissive, but I don't like the protagonist to be. I know it sounds like I'm contradicting myself, but that's my taste anyway, I just wanted to ask if you're going to play a domineering character someday? Thanks ## translated from google translate##

BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4BAM_AMVS

First of all i would like too mention that mc will be submissive to the fmc. One of my favorite yuri novels not only for the plot but also for the update stability and the interactions between the kat(mc) and jahi .,., this is novel is harem but at same time it's not as the author mentioned in chapter 25 that the jahi will marry two other women due to political resonons and the author as also mentioned that the hareme will not be more than 3 including kat and the one who own the harem will be jahi(not kat) and about the world background the author is slowly telling about the world thats all i have to say as of now i am in chap 25

LazyReader_
LazyReader_Lv3LazyReader_

Its a good story but im not really comfortable with harem on both sides usually i only see harem on oneside......................................

GodKingHuruu
GodKingHuruuLv2GodKingHuruu

Everything is top tier, author didnt rush the story nor the development of characters, the world is a fantasy type filled with monsters and cute slimes, as of chapter 66, I have saw no flaws in this story, though I wasnt looking for any in particular. This story is also yuri, which already gets it a thums up from me, author also likes all my random comments which dosent make me happy AT ALL. Short review but really jus read the it.

Aria_Heart
Aria_HeartLv14Aria_Heart

this story is just all around top quality and I'm in love with it. the character development is amazing and cute. can't wait too read more. 💖

King_linley123
King_linley123Lv14King_linley123

Great story, with an interesting plot and world building. Only thing I would comment on is making sure Kat STAYS NUMBER 1. Please don’t let the other 2 just barge in and stand on equal footing with her.

UncrownedKing
UncrownedKingLv14UncrownedKing

(Vague spoilers from up to chapter 700) This is going to be super long, but it isn't really negative and should all be constructive, so buckle up lol. First and foremost, I love some of the fluff bits. I'd even go as far as to say it's one of this novel's strong points. But like you said, there are times where it just feels like nothing is moving forwards, and I think I know why. I think a part of the problem is the pacing. One of the reasons for that is that sometimes, this isn't really treated as only Kat's story. Rather this is Kat, Jahi, Anput and Leone's collective story. Switching to their perspective so often and needing to cover how they progress slows things down a bit because it's almost like you're writing 1 3/4's of a story. There are times when we have several chapters back to back that all take place in the same day just from everyone's pov. Now don't get me wrong, I don't think that's a problem. That's just an objective observation. In fact I'm glad you do it so it doesn't feel like they are just side characters instead of true romantic love interests. Their relationship wouldn't work as well as it does without the insight into them individually. That said, it does slow things down, especially when this story often goes at a pace of only a few days passing at a time. Sometimes even day to day. Basically, I just think there needs to be larger time skips every so often. These girls are supposed to live for hundreds if not thousands of years, so it's kind of wild that not a single one of them is even in the double digits yet. If I'm not mistaken it's only been like, what, three, maybe four months or so since Kat returned from her involuntary sight seeing trip? And yet that was almost 300 chapters ago soon. She left around 270 or so. Spent a few months, at most, away and returned 420. So about 150 chapters to cover a few months. Not too bad, until you consider several years passed before that event until they got to school. And that everything after that all takes place during the same year. I'm not sure an entire year has passed since they got to school and certainly not since they passed their tests. Going by logic at least, a year should have passed, but it doesn't really feel like it. It actually feels like more should have passed by, but the characters make it seem like less actually has. And that leads to my final point. I think you're both making them grow too fast while also trying to prevent them from doing that exact same thing. They're only 8 (at least Leone was confirmed to still be 8) and have only been training for, what, 3 to 4 years now? If I'm not completely remembering things wrong, Kat "woke up" when she was 5, right? So how come after only 3 years are they even remotely close to a knight's level? It just kind of undermines the power level of the entire world, ya know? I get they're all very special in their own ways. Once in a lifetime talents. But 3 years of training, even from the best teachers, really shouldn't have them where they are now. I just feel like that was from a combination of not wanting them to grow too quickly through huge passages of time, but also needing them to be that strong to even progress in the first place. So you're stuck in a place where they are making a lot of progress but no time is actually passing. A bit of a conundrum if you will. Now, I don't have too much in the way of solutions this far into the story but I would recommend just biting the bullet and giving the other characters levels or at least level approximations. Effective levels if you will. This is only because, as it is currently, it's really hard to judge how strong anyone is in this story. We know the peek with the empress, but we don't really know how far away that peek actually is. Kat is making progress but when you don't really have anything to visually compare that with, it feels like it might as well not even matter. When you have her effectively on a similar level to Jahi, then have Jahi constantly sparring with her mother, it just feels like they're already near the top. Even if logically we know how much her mother has to be holding back, without any actual indication, it's hard to place. In fact, due to Chodeva essentially being treated as a plaything by Lady Fenryas just like everyone else, it just makes it feel like they're around the same level. I would recommend giving her someone serious to fight that the girls can't help with to truly show the gap between them and more importantly, how far they all still have to grow. There's a reason most action novels have some kind of ranking system. Cultivation, adventurer ranks, knight ranks, mage tiers, levels, etc. In any case this ran a lot longer than I thought but I hope it helps.

This_Isntreal
This_IsntrealLv2This_Isntreal

I got up to around chapter 20 before the number of action sentences starting with "ing" verbs got too grating to keep reading. After that, I jumped ahead just to see if it stuck around since the author said they started to take the story more seriously at some point, and it's STILL an issue of most sentences that are used for describing someone taking an action. The story COULD be fine, but I will never know because... it's just really, REALLY annoying to read.

Maureen_Akansiaba
Maureen_AkansiabaLv1Maureen_Akansiaba

great story I love everything about it it's so unique 😍 😁😁😁😁

LokeErBest
LokeErBestLv14LokeErBest

Well, at the start we are in the MCs POV. Yet the entire story feels like it isn’t based on the reincarnated MC. I mean who read this novel and wants to read about how her mother gets screwed a lot? I’m dissatisfied and disappointed since even after 30 chapters she’s young. The cherry on top has to be that it’s a harem, yet it isnt the MCs harem. This story has wasted potential in my opinion and feels like it isnt going anywhere. I also don’t the choices the author makes. So now after deciding to drop after 30 chapters ish, I’m annoyed, sad and a little angry.

caleb_o
caleb_oLv15caleb_o

Just starting out and loving the character interactions and quickly adapting to her new family and life that she chose for herself. Even makes cleaning interesting! Like Happy Gilmore for golf

TyTyTy
TyTyTyLv11TyTyTy

Words, love those. Simply put; I. Am. Speechless. For the most part! The story is well written, love the writing style, and the characters are very interesting! I love the dynamics and how the author slowly builds up to some plot points. In the beginning, the story is slow, but not filled with useless blabber. The author takes their time easing you into the world, which while it is described pretty vaguely (as of C105) I'll say it has a few interesting concepts. The magic system is just AMAZING! I saw a review stating it was boring, and honestly(not to throw shade), I completely disagree. It is well thought out, unique and has a very interesting premise to it. Overall, it is a breath of fresh air. Now I don't typically indulge in harem novels, and I still haven't because this is a semi-harem novel (or was it a lite-harem? Forgot what the author dubbed it lol) There are only four main lovers, and the mc isn't technically the leader of this pseudo harem, that is also a breath of fresh air. Then there is a small detail, well not so small detail mentioned in one of the earlier chapters, one that makes this novel a bit more unique on web-novel, I won't say what it is(for the author I'll admit it involves humans), and it doesn't really affect the story much, but it's still dope. Okay... so I wasn't speechless, right. Am I missing anything? Oh yeah! Did I mention just how much of a breath of fresh air this novel is. I urge you to read it. It isn't for everyone, and there are minor grammar errors once in a blue moon, but yeah!

vortexx02
vortexx02Lv3vortexx02

very good story with well written and developed characters with a quite good plot.

Mary_Ezeudo
Mary_EzeudoLv1Mary_Ezeudo

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