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2024-06-27 05:59

As someone who read this when it was only at 350 chapters before recently coming back to it: I really like it but after about chapter 400 ish it starts feeling extremely repetitive and AI generated. This sucks because it feels like the writing has taken a step back and it’s not like it’s the end of the world but it’s definitely something you’ll notice and start getting bothered by.

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Update: The story improves drastically at about chapter 538 ish. It feels a lot more like how the earlier chapters felt and is a massive improvement over what was previously being written. If you’re able to handle that little patch of(in my opinion) lower quality chapters then I’d highly recommend continuing to read.

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