TyTyTy

It's to my understanding that, after translating everything, Alduin's intentions in Skyrim were to rule the world, not eat it. He believed himself fit to be a god, hence his brother's defection to the mortals. The roars you hear at the throat of the world in the beginning, before he arrives, are theorised to be Alduin and his brother fighting, which Alduin wins. Anywho, back to the story I go.

Okay, you have piqued my interest. Also, I love the quality of the writing so far! From the diction to the tone, I'd give you a five-star review on the spot if this wasn't your first chapter! Anywho, looking forward to the next chapter. Best of luck to ya. Ahem, also, tftc!

Thanks for the chapter!

tftc! I'm enjoying this story more than some of your others! It's refreshing without the system!

"The nights on the isle could be said to be anything but silent," This could be said in a number of different ways. The clause is a little blocky, so you should try a few alternatives when writing a clause like this. You could simply say "The nights on the isle were said to be anything but silent," or you could go further and say "The nights on the isle were anything but silent". This can apply to everything whilst writing. Try making your pros less blocky to improve the flow of your paragraphs and you might even find it a little easier to write!

This is terrible life advice!

I am speechless. Like, actually, forgetting to capitalize the first letter of your paragraphs aside, your writing is pretty good! Looking forward to future chapters!

Uhh, magic--yeah, magic! That's what happening to you! Magic... right?

So real!

So she just has to sit there and chill whenever the system goes down? LOL