Keikokumars
Too. Much filler speaking same thing in 10 different ways does not make it sound exp. Starting till middle was good but now it's like ****. The story is good but for each small climax one needs to wait more than 6 months to have few quality exp chapters and the rest are fillers which are expanded to fill slacks/laziness. Like nov,2019 end there was a series of few good chapter and now it's Almost April we are waiting for its continuation. Each chapter 80-85 % is filled with author narration how mc shits only 10% accounts to real development and that to is a filler. I am not saying the story is bad but you must be a follower of mad_snail to give good score. Sure it has unexpected twist and turns even few exp chapter for which author keeps us thirsty for half a year, yet we are his ***** still waiting for few exp that send our dopamine to high. So the is both loved and cursed, but what can we he is doing for $ and I agree it is difficult to make stiff exp chapter/turns every now and then. But its earnest request to author to please reduce the amount of your monologue to make the story not be hated by readers.
This is one of the rare novel I love and hate, as it's difficult to find a novel to be in a love-hate relationship with I was glad to have found this novel. In my opinion the main point of the story is complexity, which is both the good and bad point of the novel. As it is one of the best novel in utilizing the fantasy genre albeit with some glaring flaws. The complexity of the world and power setting is the best part of the story and in my opinion the crowd favorite .even so the complex story causes many loopholes as I began to wonder from the start how people becomes loyal to a organization so abruptly and when a chance to get power I would guess the mob mentality be changed but modern people starts to follow command as if they are inherently destined to be like that. Meanwhile the romance is the worst part of the story as it is very redundant and melodramatic and it feels like the author wanted both realistic and fantasy loving light hearted audience and like myself who connected with the prince felt sad about Sofia and her dilemma to choose mc or not whilst it is realistic and how it works in real world most of us who read fantasy for enjoying a fantasy dream world not a realistic melodrama . And the romance part makes the story complicated and grim as it feels like variety of genre is mixed together and shoved in your face . The Romance is like a reality check and it bummed me out when I was immersed in the adventure part of the story. While I love the fantasy part of the story I detest the realistic components of the romance SO I HOPE THE AUTHOR WON'T MAKE THE ROMANCE ANY MORE DARKER OR MELODRAMATIC . It is a great novel for fantasy fans if you don't mind the ntr tease and want to convey my appreciation for the author and hope he won't let the story be darker than it already is and hope both Sofia and Katrina be with him
Well what can i say, when i first saw this in royal road it really draws me in. the story is unique, the world building is wonderful and the characters have depths. The only problem that i have is the grammar but, as long as you can understand it all is well right? unless you'r a grammar nazi. Read it to find out what i'm saying fellow daoist. you won't regret it.
The story is great, the fight scenes and the power ups are also good. but the romance is probably the worse I have ever seen, everytime I read it, I feel like pulling my hair out. I'm at chapter 1249 even after the break up it just gets worse. Just stop already this romance thing is pointless and doesn't even add to the plot
The main character claims he plays games all day yet he doesn't know basic knowledge about games? The first skill he gets is called beast tame and when he chooses a class he finds the class 'beast king' that would probably compliment his first and only skill and he didn't choose it but kept looking at the rest? And he decided to choose the class the halves his strength? Dude that's the dumbest **** ever, that's like purposefully making yourself a cripple. The writing quality is abismal as there are many spelling mistakes and he uses '...' instead of "..." For when people are talking you use '...' for when people are thinking "..." Is when you speak you sod. The system is kinda retarded and too long, the skills are half assed as they could only used on one thing such as the beast tame and it doesn't even last long. The character names himself 'Shadow lord' I'm not kidding, that's an insane amount of cringe tbh it's like when I was 5 and I created my animal jam account and decided yeah this is a cool name it's edgy duddee.
My god, I don’t understand why this story is so highly rated. Sure, it’s got a decent plot but... it reads like it’s been Machine Translated. The first paragraph of chapter 1 alone is enough to show this, as the entire paragraph is a singular sentence. There’s little to no usage of periods, commas are everywhere, and much of the word choice makes no sense. It may seem highly negative of me to say this, but personally I don’t believe that a story with so little effort put into wording deserves any sort of positive response from us. If the author wants to elevate the story higher, they need to go back and fix the writing.
Very enjoyable story overall. I would recommend it. The Grammer and the words used/structure of the writing is poor. While it improves as the story goes on, the fact that the author didn't have it re-edited or fixed before transferring the story to webnovel is terrible. Especially considering the story is now premium, and the flow of the early premium chapters are almost just as bad as the non premium chapters. There are also more fillers then I would prefer, but they do serve their intended purpose of world building, so it isn't all that bad. Overall, very enjoyable and I will keep reading
Well the story is excellent so far . Have been following the story for long time( from royalroadl) about 3 years . Dude( writer) u have been to lots of problems on ur journey ( of writing) financial most of the time or ur famial problems. But as one of ur oldest readers good job man . From a ******* writer to now a signed and paid author with few books . Well good luck with ur life😁🤣🤩🤩
Hahahahah the best story is finally here the great azief is here The rest is filler dhdjhdhdjdjdjdjdjxhdbshs7gjcjchftigigjvvkgigkftjx8tdoyx5d7ficydjgjfuguxts8gkvjdtqogjvjdyrlvkdueibkvudugovjd7t9hlvurivkfutovid8gkcye7fic5a7gov6eivkx6ckvjcigififucsuckbificufug8diguxhdjxrhkkfhxjeywisyroeudu chasing ben3usbeusu
Masterpiece, those who say otherwise are sour people and have no patience to observe this written art. Author, don't stop, even if destiny and destiny show that people are not bringing you income today, it doesn't mean that it can't be done in the future! I love your work, I see your pain. Every time I look at the sidebar and see it as small as thirteen thousand words, my heart screams with excitement... and when the bar is so small that I imagine it has more than twenty thousand words, I get up to get coffee! I will always support you, you are on my list. One day I will pay for all karma. Don't forget, have the strength to fight against destiny and destiny, one day everyone those who owe you karma just like on the stairs karma. will be paid!!!
The idea is pretty good but the problem is that it is so annoying and difficult do read because of grammar mistakes or CAPS LOG. In addition this story develops too fast and random. For example, the MC and the FL just meet and a few hours later it is "them against the world" but before the author completes there love story the MC has to disappear for a few months iI.which he will fall in love again?!? All in all it was not very fun to read since it is difficult to follow the story due to the above mentioned problems.