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Gamez
GamezLv145yrGamez

Very enjoyable story overall. I would recommend it. The Grammer and the words used/structure of the writing is poor. While it improves as the story goes on, the fact that the author didn't have it re-edited or fixed before transferring the story to webnovel is terrible. Especially considering the story is now premium, and the flow of the early premium chapters are almost just as bad as the non premium chapters. There are also more fillers then I would prefer, but they do serve their intended purpose of world building, so it isn't all that bad. Overall, very enjoyable and I will keep reading

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Lord Shadow

Keikokumars

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Sorry about that. I have been scolded by my readers about that too. Anyway I am thinking of hiring an editor. My previous editor all have been busy with life and they could not edited more than a few chapters. When that happens don't worry I will inform it on the description page. And thank you and I am grateful that you were not deterred by the grammar Hell in the earlier chapter. Really hope you enjoy the story.