Review Detail of DropZ in Lord Shadow

The idea is pretty good but the problem is that it is so annoying and difficult do read because of grammar mistakes or CAPS LOG. In addition this story develops too fast and random. For example, the MC and the FL just meet and a few hours later it is "them against the world" but before the author completes there love story the MC has to disappear for a few months iI.which he will fall in love again?!? All in all it was not very fun to read since it is difficult to follow the story due to the above mentioned problems.