Sighđ this novel has a lot of potential especially for the story it could be way better but a lot of things hold it down. For one the grammar is like a 7 year old is writing and does not have the vocabulary to express that the they want to say. Two is the thing that gets to me the most and that will be the romance on the novel yea at the start itâs ok it can get a passing grade but the more you read the more you start to see the faults it has, ok I get it if you canât let go your high school crash thatâs ok and the âmost beautifulâ woman loves you cool I have no problem with that but the most annoying part is the fact after all the changes the world has gone though you canât itâs ok to have two women by your side, no one is forcing you to choose between one. Itâs frustrating because he can understand to many things but still acts like a little bitch when it comes to love itâs really stupid. Those are like the two things holding this novel back.
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