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Idk this chapter kind of feels out of place. Like, he’s positing a theory to which he himself just made up on the spot with zero reference or grounds. Why is his first thought “WHY HASNT THE BEAST DOMAIN ATTACKED OMG THEYRE SO SCARY.” When like, bro chill out, I wasn’t even thinking about something nonsensical as the beast domain attacked. Nothing in the story so far has even suggested that was a possibility? Why even bring it up?
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I appreciate the reply and explanation but I’ve already taken the book out of my collection. I won’t be reading this anymore. Good luck with the rest of the story but I don’t want to spend any more coins on this when it’s so frustrating for me to read. Like the other commenter said, this whole arc is “mid” and just not very entertaining. They said there are a lot of useless chapters and while I mostly agree, I think that’s not even the biggest problem. I think the biggest issue is just how the story feels so aimless. The in-story narrator isn’t being reliable in giving direction or giving an omniscient view to the reader, leaving the reader in a worse position than the characters themselves with understanding what’s going on in the story. Theres no understanding of what the next “goal” is in the story. Is it graduate? Is it murder the entire academy and staff for treating him so poorly and like a guinea pig for experiments? Is it battle other races and be a savior to humanity? Is it join forces with other races and become an evil god? I can speculate all day with a million other directions but in all of them I’ll just be disappointed because it’s like I’m doing the narrator’s job for them. Good luck on your story man but my complaint last time was my peak frustration and now I’m just over it. I have you another several hundred of my coins, but it’s not worth it to me anymore. I liked the premise of the story, initially at least, so there’s that.
Alright, I can’t deal with this anymore. The whole pretense of the school being ridiculously cruel for no reason. Unrealistic in its “training” methods that make zero sense. All this does will just raise Atticus, through the magic power of plot armor, to survive barely and become more and more of a villain. I’m really tired and upset with the whole “nerf” the Mc down to nothing instead of the progressive building up you had been doing. It seems like you’ve just completely lost sense of the original direction you were going with the story once we got to this school and none of it makes sense for humanity’s benefit. It’s just idiocy on every level of thinking this is a benefit for humanity. Honestly, I was really curious how the story would advance and you really started out strong with the camp disaster and the cool ability of Atticus with the sword, but I’ve gotta stop wasting my coins on this story now. Sorry bud but you’ve just gone in a different direction and he barely even uses his katana at all. Every powerup he gets just doesn’t matter if you strip them away and if he plays around and only uses elements to fight with. You even made the suit have such a downside that he doesn’t even want to use it. Theres too many negatives here. I’m done. I’ll let the door hit me on the way out but sorry man, I just can’t keep reading this.
The only thing I question about all of this, isn’t using the martial heart supposed to reduce your life span? How is he 500 years old and still alive if he has such a long history of using his martial heart and training so many other martial seniors to the point they’ve reached the Martial Master stage. What kind of consequence does using this insane technique he’s using now have on his life span? Isn’t he just going to drop dead randomly in the middle of this fight with Rui? He should be at the absolute limit of his life span right?