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The novels whole premise is not original and cliche. I haven't seen a truly original and noon-cliche novel in a long time; especially on Webnovel. But no, you're not alone.
I turned off paragraph comments, but I turned it back on as soon as I read this. I couldn't wait to see the comments.
I feel like you're an experienced reader. As such, you should realize that trying to bring any logic or reasoning to these novels is pointless. You really have to turn off part of your brain to enjoy it fully. Some people can do it, some people can't. It'll only hurt your further to try and make sense of anything.
I mean, you're entitled to your opinion, and you have the freedom to say what you want. But no one cares that you dropped this. Just drop it silently.
oh god, my heart.
I mean, as the reader we are not surprised, but you need to separate your thinking from the mc's. We have all the previous experience of reading novels, so we know what's coming. I don't believe the mc could have known she was a gold core, sure he could have guessed, but he would still be surprised when confirming. Gold is the highest we have seen so far, it is so beyond is natural realm of course he would be surprised.
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Maybe I'm just bad with how writing works, but I read this sentence from a 3rd person perspective and not the mc. Not that your point is any less valid.
"Did your Village Chief is the one who" That part doesn't flow well/make sense. "Is your village chief the one who" "Was it your village chief the one who" Something like that? Unless I'm misconstruing the whole sentence.