Review Detail of JPNovelFan in Lord Shadow

Well, I saw some good reviews on here so I decided to binge read the first 52 chapters. I stopped at 52 because I just seriously can’t take the bad grammar, the bizarre transitions from a past timeline from a new character from the future (that isn’t the Mc), and the bizarre use of side stories in other parts of the world that are clearly irrelevant for the short-medium term. I personally just want to follow the MC’s story since his whole setup seems cool and the route he can go is neat but it feels ruined by the side characters on other parts of the world. You’ve also got random yaoi stuff in it at parts and it’s just strange and out of place. I couldn’t care less about the other top tankers in the world, like just stick to the Mc. Idk, the story keeps going for another 300+ chapters so maybe it’s improved but man I just can’t read anymore. The bad grammar and the transition with no notice to a future/past timeline thing is so jarring. Especially when you don’t know who is talking at times. Sometimes Loki just says Prince over and over and it’s like, “Oh he means the MC. Why isn’t he even saying his name or saying Lord Shadow or Shadow?” It’s so confusing. Don’t waste your time tbh.