Too. Much filler speaking same thing in 10 different ways does not make it sound exp. Starting till middle was good but now it's like ****. The story is good but for each small climax one needs to wait more than 6 months to have few quality exp chapters and the rest are fillers which are expanded to fill slacks/laziness. Like nov,2019 end there was a series of few good chapter and now it's Almost April we are waiting for its continuation. Each chapter 80-85 % is filled with author narration how mc shits only 10% accounts to real development and that to is a filler. I am not saying the story is bad but you must be a follower of mad_snail to give good score. Sure it has unexpected twist and turns even few exp chapter for which author keeps us thirsty for half a year, yet we are his ***** still waiting for few exp that send our dopamine to high. So the is both loved and cursed, but what can we he is doing for $ and I agree it is difficult to make stiff exp chapter/turns every now and then. But its earnest request to author to please reduce the amount of your monologue to make the story not be hated by readers.
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