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E.S. System: Return to the Enchanted Planet

Author: whoknowwhat
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What happens when a six thousand years-worth technology-dependent civilization comes into contact with mana, or scientifically known as ‘TreDecon’? Yes, this is what happened to the Earth… Humans are dragged down from the top of the food chain to the bottom of hell. Afraid and devastated of the dangers, humanity decided to abandon their home planet, Earth, and flee... 20 years later, Aiden and seven other adolescents return to investigate and study their once used to be their home planet. However, the enchanted land was not what they expected. The mana is known as ‘TreDecon’ had enchanted the lands somehow… Amidst the group's investigation, Aiden and two others were knocked off the path due to the sudden appearance of a giant skeleton hand. Before he joined with the others, Aiden realised that this enchanted world was more dangerous than he thought. This place wasn’t their friend at all. Will Aiden survive the ordeal that had wiped out 90% of the human population from the face of the Earth? Will he find the true reason for this ‘Mana Apocalypse’? Was it really a scientific disaster, or… Discord: https://discord.gg/9aK4SP Updates: 7-9 chapters/ week New chapter upload time: 2:30-3 a.m. Beijing time.

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Chapter 1Back to Earth.

Aiden ducked as he avoided the kick by an inch. Aiden reached for the other leg, but the man was quicker. The leg that had missed its mark came crashing down on the Aiden's head.

Even before he could attack, Aiden had to roll away. The heel made a hole on the floor but it repaired itself before the boy could lift his leg.

*Clap* *Clap*

"That's enough of that, Levi. You too, Aiden."

"Yes, Captain." Both Levi and Aiden responded in unison.

"Oh! Man. I was so close." Levi complained, putting his hand around Aiden. "Next time. I will get you."

'You've been nowhere close! If anyone could touch me, it would be Alex.' Aiden wasn't the strongest of fighters, but he was the most agile one. Still, he had felt that with each fight Alex's moves were becoming harder to dodge. 'The captain is the perfect specimen, as they say.'

'PADS, show me the result of the battle.' With Aiden's thought, the band on his neck blinked twice before arrays of data appeared in front of his eyes.

It wasn't a cheating system like Aiden had read in the novel between his training, but it was the most advanced product of the federation.

Named 'Personal Assessment and Development System'. In short, it's known as PADS. Not many of the top leaders had one. It wasn't that Aiden was someone important, but because he was on the mission he was given one.

Aiden was born in the mana slums of Luyten B which was renamed as Planet Will. It was right outside the 20 human strongholds on the planet.

No, it wasn't dangerous to live on the planet. The planet was just perfect for humans, and not many beasts could threaten the existence of a human being. Humans live in many cities on the planet, but those fortresses were standing there for a different purpose.

Like Earth, Planet Will has places with extreme weather conditions. And Desert Base 3 stood in one of those places. They cultivate humans who could overcome extreme mana poisoning and become a legendary sorcerer. The soldiers of the new era.

"What are you dreaming about? Take your seat," Alex's words woke him up.

"I'm sorry, Captain." Aiden scratched his head. Others had already taken their place.

Aiden was greeted by Elijah's smile. She pointed to the seat beside her, and Aiden accepted it with a smile.

"And we're all here," Alex's voice was intense. "In less than two hours, we will reach Earth. Let's get through the drill again.

Accepting everyone's nod, Alex began, " Alex. Water. Level 3, grade B. Captain."

"Lyla. Fire. Level 3, Grade E. Vice-Captain." The red-haired girl answered next.

"Elijah. Wind. Level 3, Grade E. First officer"

"Levi. Earth. Level 2, Grade S. Second Officer."

"Asher. Fire. Level 2, Grade S." There was no designation for the boy named Asher. It's not just him, none of the next three had one.

"Aiden. Wind. Level 2, Grade A."

"Sara. Water. Level 2, Grade A."

"Owen. Earth. Level 2, Grade B."

"Can't you try a little harder, Owen? Even Sara had become Grade A. "Levi grumbled unhappily. Owen evaded his glare and looked down.

"Levi. Stop it." They were stopped by Alex, but he did not forget to scold Owen, "Owen. While you're on the field, don't hold back the team."

Owen agreed without looking up, but Alex wasn't done, "It isn't just him. When you make an error, be ready to accept your punishment."

"Yes, Captain" their voice resonated with each other.

Alex pounded on the table as a small compartment opened in front of each of them. "This is the PADS-X. Military edition, state-of-the-art, 0.3 fs response speed, along with auto repair, combat assist and sleep protection system. And the dog tag is the key to that. Use blood to bind the system."

Their eyes were sparkling, staring at the new device. Most of them have even put it on. Aiden glanced at the neckband device. His name had been etched on the body.

"They preferred using this sort of thing in the past as well." It wasn't that Aiden knew a lot about history, but one of the novels he'd read had discussed it.

Alex confirmed his comments, "In the past when there was no Union, there were hundreds of countries out there. They used it to identify the soldiers."

"But it's different. On 'Planet Will', no matter where you are, the Federation will find you as long as you have the tag on you." Alex described the feature with pride.

Aiden wasn't sure about it, but from the rumours, he knew that Alex was one of the heirs of the leading techno enterprise. Yet what was more important to Aiden was, "And on Earth?" "

" Even with severe mana emissions, it would be 5 km. "

' 5 km? It wasn't much, but it's better than nothing.' He put it on, after dyeing it with his blood. Through the reflection on the large fish ball window of the spacecraft, Aiden confirmed that he could no longer see the invisible neckband.

"Yeah, that's it. Head to the pod and get some rest. A quick overview of the tasks will be offered to you when you get the mana poisoning shots and everything else."

"Ok Captain." Everyone stood up and moved toward their stasis pod.

'1:42:21' The number continued to decline in the left corner of his view. Thinking about it, Aiden couldn't help but sigh. From the mana slum to the top of the Desert Base 3. Now he's hours away from the birthplace of mankind.

"You're going to age quicker if you sigh too much." Aiden turned to be greeted by Elijah, "Can I talk to you for a moment?"

"Of course." Aiden chuckled.

"Can you believe that? "Elijah asked, gazing out at the dark space. "We've been working with each other for 10 years, and now we're here."

'Huh! She's thinking about the same thing.' Aiden's grin grew wider, "Yeah, you were just 8 then, I was six.'

A sudden pinch greeted Aiden, "Don't mention the age of a girl." Listening to her, Aiden couldn't contain his grin.

Somewhere in between, she squeezed Aiden's side, "Aiden, I'm scared."

"What should a 3E grade mage be afraid of?" Aiden added a moment later, "I'd say I'm going to defend you, but I'm just a 2A grade mage."

Aiden was confronted by a pair of stern eyes at the next moment. She was trying to save her hand from his grasp, but it failed. One sudden tug sent her in the embrace of Aiden.

"Then again, my battle rating is higher than you. So I will protect you." Aiden whispered in the ear of the struggling Elijah. After a moment of struggle, she calmed down and returned the embrace.

"We're running out of time. So if you two lovebirds could stop wasting time, it would have been easier."

As soon as Alex's words rang in his ear, a sudden push from Elijah sent Aiden to his butt. Elijah backed away from them while hiding her ashamed face.

Gripping Alex's palm, Aiden stood up. "Aiden, get yourself ready. We may have to go to war as soon as we land. You can do those things after we return. Ok?"

"Yes, Captain." Alex avoided poking his soft corner, but it made him more embarrassed.

"Go quick. Your parents are waiting. It will be harder to get in contact after we cross Saturn."

Aiden raced back to the stasis capsule. When he stepped in, the pod closed on its own. Lukewarm gel kept wrapping around his body. The next time he opened his eyes, he stood in a green meadow.

Four individuals were standing in front of him. A grey-haired man who looked older than his age, a young woman who had made an unusual pair with an old man. A young girl who stared at him with red eyes, and a little boy who rushed to see him as soon as he appeared.

"Brother, brother. Why are you so late, huh? I've been waiting for so long." The boy, not older than 7, grumbled as he jumped to Aiden.

"Sorry Aaron, your brother's been a little busy."

"Aaron, come down. You are so heavy, you shouldn't let your brother carry you." Looking at his mother, Aaron tried to wiggle down, but Aiden didn't let him.

"Come on, mother. It's a virtual space. I don't feel any weight."

"You shouldn't pamper him too much." His father grumbled.

Aiden tried to smile, but his conscience was overcome by a sudden blast of pain. The agony was so intense that his leg was giving away.

Even if it was virtual space, Aiden could not let himself fall while holding Aaron. At the time he recovered consciousness, he was already on his knees.

"What happened?"

"Aiden!!"

Waves of worry engulfed him as soon as he recovered, but the girl was the first. "Please don't go anywhere, brother. Come back here. Please don't go. "She continued her unfinished crying while embracing Aiden.

'What are you doing here, Arya?' His father tried to scream, but he couldn't. Neither he nor his wife wanted to let their child die.

Ten years ago, when Aiden was selected as a candidate, they were very pleased. Aiden had worked hardest over the years, and they were the ones who had enjoyed the fruits of his success.

It was the culmination of Aiden's hard work, that he could move from the Mana Slum to become the director of a large business. Even if he were the CEO of a medium-sized business before relocation, no one knows better than him that it would have been difficult without Aiden.

"No, no. I'm alright. I'm going to get my shots. "Aiden spoke as his face twitched in discomfort. Looking at his profile, his mother couldn't stop herself, hugging her three children.

'A man shouldn't weep.' Even though his father whispered those words in his head, it was hard for him to stop the tears.

"What the hell are you doing? I'm alright. Don't cry. Signals will be cut as soon as we cross Saturn." But Aiden's pleading was in vain, and the humid atmosphere started to affect him as well.

"What the hell are you crying for? The mission will be done in two or three months. We're going ..." Aiden couldn't finish his sentence when he realized the warm feeling of the embrace disappeared.

Looking up, he found that his family members were just as shocked. His mother attempted to reach his son for the last time but failed as they faded away from his vision.

Aiden collapsed on the green grass as he was enduring the pain of the shots. It took quite a while to get used to the pain, "Today is painful."

He had no idea if it was the pain or the atmosphere that had affected his tear ducts yet he suffered in silence.

Ignoring the agony, Aiden stood up, "PADS, show me the list of missions." Aiden was surprised by a lack of response as the grin emerged on his face at the next moment, "PADS-X, show me the list of missions."

In front of his vision, a massive, transparent screen created from thin air.

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killjoy103
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A scientific explanation of mana. Something I have never seen before. That is why I am doing a review. The story is of a group of teenagers (mage) who came back to explore the earth after something called mana apocalypse. Writing Quality: I think the author has put a lot of time behind it. there is a nice flow of the plot. the info had hidden quite perfectly in the story. It's like any other but reading it feel different from other writing. Stability of updates: it's 1/day. too quick to say anything about it. hope the author will keep up. Till now the chapters are >2000 words. Story development: It is six chapters long. too soon? no. The authors have shown me so many emotions(fear, anger, resentment, loneliness, pain. and it is just 6 chapters long), so much back story without even written about it, what can I say this is awesome. This is one of the best parts of the story. Character Development: Let's not talk about mc. Let's not spoil it, but one chapter appeared in chapter 1 and died by 5. author concluded about him by 6 with just 4 appearances. yet I can't help but feel sorry for him. This is awesome. Though till now it feels mc driven plot. I hope the more important characters will be there as the story develops. World Background: there are two worlds, earth and will. hope we will know more about them soon enough. my words: it started for a contest. I hope the author doesn't give up after the contest is over. the good point is if it wins it will be contracted so no chance of stopping then. Please author send me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Alright so this story is absolutely a joy to read. You’ve got sci-fi, fantasy, cultivation and magic with an interesting post-apocalyptic setting. Basically the MC is part of a team of child (ages 15-16) soldiers sent across the galaxy to explore Earth that they originally left due to mana poisoning and basically apocalyptic stuff that forced them to leave their home planet. Now the MC is back on earth to complete missions but it doesn’t go as expected and he has road blocks from both the environment and even his fellow man that make his exploration on this old planet very dangerous. I would say that the MC is strong but in no way is he overpowered. He’s got a lot of limitations that make him struggle massively in fights and situations but he does have that MC plot armor/luck so he gets through everything at least (no matter how injured or near death). The author does do a great job building suspense and make the reader feel like there is an intensity to the current situation the MC is in that makes it captivating to keep reading. For other readers like me: there’s no harem and that’s a good thing in my opinion. Romance is really only at the beginning but it kind of goes away very quickly so I won’t spoil it. This is definitely a pure action and intrigue story so I wouldn’t really expect romance so you shouldn’t either. There’s also lots of cool monsters and battles so if you’re into that, I highly recommend checking this story out. Give it a read. The only negative I’d give is that there are so few chapters. I usually only read stories with 100-150+ chapters because I hate waiting for daily releases. Now I’m caught up in the current 70+ chapter range and it’s going to be hell waiting for new chapters since the story is so good. Well, go ahead and give the story a read and I think it’s very deserving of its current ratings. I’m usually a pain in the butt to please if anyone knows me from other stories’ comment sections if you recognize my username lmao. For real, this story is good though. Super entertaining!

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