MokouFriedChicken

I'm getting there, but there's still a chance to pivot depending on if I ever get feedback

Again, depends on feedback, but the foundation for it already existst

Typical shilling for my own work review here. I'd say that it's a culmination of everything I've learned up until now. A work catered far from my tastes and to the masses. Or at least, that's what I hope. Romance and stuff will be determined depending on feedback

It's great. I can't wait to read more of this. I can only hope that the MC actually starts inventing stuff and roll over his enemies soon though. The rebellion angle is also neat

A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that

Glad you liked it

Well that was fast. Tastefully done scenes aside, the flowery prose in display here is well done. Scenes are painted beautifully and the world is being filled out nicely. Would recommend.

This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.

How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.

How novel. Such an interesting concept. The execution is fairly good, and just... it's so unique that I just want to see where it goes. The quality writing just makes it all the better.