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It’s an old series I’m redoing

I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work

The writing quality of the book is very well developed. I really enjoyed the somber undertone the story gave, reminiscent of the grim dark fantasy genre. The development is fantastic and I can't wait for more, keep up the updates author

No, I plan to pick it up at some point. I'm getting ready for college, so writing isn't my biggest priority at the moment. Although, I really would like to keep going with it soon.

The begining is slow, but when you think it's going to normal, it sprinkles a little bit of foreshadowing to keep you interested. The writing is really well done and the descriptions are great. I can't wait to see what will happen! Good job author!

I enjoyed reading this story, it's really good so far and the premise is very interesting. I already added it to my library and I plan to read all of it when I get the chance. Some of the grammar is out of place, but it still intrigues me nonetheless. The last thing I want to say is that what I've read is amazing so far and I look forward to reading more in the future. Thank you, author!!

Yeah, he is.

A little creative liberty, I like to think receiving a god's power for the first time would hurt. Although, I could be wrong.

Wow, I really like the start of this!!

The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!