Demonmaster

It depends on your preference, but it felt like a regular Chinese novel. If you like it, you like it, but if you hate it then nobody can get you to keep reading. Read the first 10-20 chapters then decide. I gave it up for other novels like the legendary mechanic.

I was writing on an another novel. Just ignore this.

Not all of them. Some were forced to add nationalism, but yeah a lot of them are puppets to the government since they need to earn money.

I highly recommend this Harry Potter fan fiction, usually most fan fictions are ruined or dumb, but this wasn’t and is quite nice. Writing quality 5/5. Almost no mistakes, and if there is it’s just a minor one. Character design 5/5. An original character (reincarnated) who is smart, wise, strong, and loves to learn and travel. Also the main character read the Harry Potter books and knows a lot of information that will happen, but he usually doesn’t want to interact with or change Harry Potter and his friends. Story development 5/5. It introduces Harry Potter stuff midway through but it’s only a little focused on that. Most of the story development has nothing to do with the original Harry Potter and is usually focused on magic instead, and that is more interesting to me. World background 5/5. One of main reason I love this fan fiction so greatly The main character loves to travel the world, and because of this a lot of world background is different from the original Harry Potter, though most of the Hogwarts stay the same, some new things are added. This introduces new elements and perspective compared to the original Harry Potter series. Less time is spent on explaining or interacting in Hogwarts because of this, but still there quite the sum of chapters on Hogwarts. Stability of Updates 5/5. There is usually one chapter a day and to me that’s good enough (even though I want more). Overall great fan fiction and highly recommended 5/5.

Uh pretty sure many people did, but web novel did this on purpose to avoid copy write so why would they shoot themselves on the foot by fixing it.

I really don’t understand why synopsis is different from the story. I mean the system is almost never used expect for the beginning. I would have liked a story with the synopsis to be honest. I mean the story is kinda weird especially the start which made no sense. The world background is the best so far and is actually somewhat fleshed out. Character design I really think it’s just average. The story development is also average. Translation quality uh average for web novel. Updates likely same as other picked stories of two a day which is good.

I somewhat agree with you, but giving a 1 star review just because the main character is not ruthless does seem a little overboard. I mean if you read Harry Potter, I don’t think the characters there are ruthless, so why would this person give a 1 star review on a Harry Potter fan fiction? It’s just weird and somewhat surprising. Though, at least this person gave a review rather than just random stuff and putting a 1 star like most reviews nowadays... 😔

So, what about the world building and other stuff, other than the MC not being ruthless?

🤔 Well just upload stuff to Amazon. This website won’t be able to do anything. Unless China doesn’t allow it then idk.

Can someone tell me who translated this because this translator will be on my blacklist (making one right now just for this translator) at number 1 worst translator. Anyways the story is below average with some missing info (not sure if it’s the translator), characters are just there to say how good the mc is, translation is garbage, character design is not what I like, and this only thing that’s good is the world background, which is also just average in my opinion. Well actually the updates are always on time so far. Overall a 1.5, but it would be a 2.5 with a different translator.