Reviews of AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

Definatly worth a read, its a great novel with some really original ideas and plotlines attached, loving the drawings the author has created that go alongside the novel whitch really solidify the alchemy’s concept. thank you very much author for an amazing book :)

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The story starts from slave labour Village and, going by the title, will be building to a kingdom. The world building seems very consistent, the magic system is mostly hard, but seems to have some mystery left as well. The competence is spread throughout the cast, there are several relevant figures, without whom the village would probably fail. They have real cause for the changes they try to enact. There are setbacks and challenges. And the progression seems perfectly plausible given the initial setup. Major bonus for (so far ) not including the whole creepy boy stalks girl "romance" from me

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The story is very well written. They way the mc acts is in accordance with his age and experience: a bit naive and kind to those he knows. The magic system and alchemy system is very welled explained and well integrated with the world as a whole. I am still confused about how the AI come to be but it doesn't effect my ability to understand the novel. The world building is pretty decent, the author uses other people's perspectives besides the MCs to give the reader a better feel of the world. Although I have to say the change in POV with brand new characters can get confusing at times, is just a little to much at times. like more then 3 pov changes in a single chapter. tho the chapters are long if it acts as a solace. Overall highly recommend! P.S only read till like the 10th chapter so take it as you will!

The world setting, the feelings of characters, their personal interests, different people and their personality everything has detail. Enjoy reading it. Give it a try.

Great translation quality, I like where the story is heading so far. if I had any major issues with the story it would be the POV change every chapter, I get what the author was trying to do but it was to much like filler -i.e. POV change to bad situation someone completely unrelated to the story dies then changes POV back to the mc like nothing ever happened.

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the slow start proceeding is better to build the world and i also like the multiple main chars but i dont like the jumping around to different chars each chapter

great book love how he shows use the drawing of the items like the spliting path that links back to the main story really good world building

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constant grammatical and syntax errors, not to mention misusing words that are similar to others in english. the story line is very deus ex machina driven, all outside control, no natural development. little to no literary devices used either. the MC is a dime a dozen character with no unique or defining personality traits, nor are his companions. the worlds concept is interesting. everything else was done poorly. not worth the read. the author needs to stop sending out chapters, go over his work and correct his mistakes to improve

the writing (in english) is so abysmal, it ruins any benefit to reading. constant poor grammar, bad syntax, poor vocabulary, little to no knowledge of basic english rules. destroys any appeal the book could have. hire a new translator, go over the original chapters, fix the atrocious mistakes (minimum one per paragraph, often 3+)