Review Detail of Bobby0707 in AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

Item: AK - The Alchemy Kingdom
Rating: 4.4

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Bobby0707Lv153yrBobby0707

the slow start proceeding is better to build the world and i also like the multiple main chars but i dont like the jumping around to different chars each chapter

AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

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Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! I'll try to keep that in mind when I'm writing the new chapters and editing the old ones... The comments are really important to help me improve the novel.

3yr