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MS_slothLv143yrMS_sloth

The story starts from slave labour Village and, going by the title, will be building to a kingdom. The world building seems very consistent, the magic system is mostly hard, but seems to have some mystery left as well. The competence is spread throughout the cast, there are several relevant figures, without whom the village would probably fail. They have real cause for the changes they try to enact. There are setbacks and challenges. And the progression seems perfectly plausible given the initial setup. Major bonus for (so far ) not including the whole creepy boy stalks girl "romance" from me

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AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

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MS_slothLv14MS_sloth

Addendum. I think this is my new favourite story on here.

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DreamWeaverWritingLv2DreamWeaverWriting

Thanks for the awesome review, I think you described the story's flow perfectly for new readers... Thanks again for your support, if you have any suggestions be free to share it in the comments!