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Great translation quality, I like where the story is heading so far. if I had any major issues with the story it would be the POV change every chapter, I get what the author was trying to do but it was to much like filler -i.e. POV change to bad situation someone completely unrelated to the story dies then changes POV back to the mc like nothing ever happened.

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AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

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Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! It helps me a lot... I'll try to keep that in mind.