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The story is very well written. They way the mc acts is in accordance with his age and experience: a bit naive and kind to those he knows. The magic system and alchemy system is very welled explained and well integrated with the world as a whole. I am still confused about how the AI come to be but it doesn't effect my ability to understand the novel. The world building is pretty decent, the author uses other people's perspectives besides the MCs to give the reader a better feel of the world. Although I have to say the change in POV with brand new characters can get confusing at times, is just a little to much at times. like more then 3 pov changes in a single chapter. tho the chapters are long if it acts as a solace. Overall highly recommend! P.S only read till like the 10th chapter so take it as you will!

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AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

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Thanks for reviewing my novel! Your support and suggestions can help me improve the story and keep me motivated.