Review Detail of Aaron_McLeod_1690 in AK - The Alchemy Kingdom

constant grammatical and syntax errors, not to mention misusing words that are similar to others in english. the story line is very deus ex machina driven, all outside control, no natural development. little to no literary devices used either. the MC is a dime a dozen character with no unique or defining personality traits, nor are his companions. the worlds concept is interesting. everything else was done poorly. not worth the read. the author needs to stop sending out chapters, go over his work and correct his mistakes to improve