Reviews of Vampire's Obsession

The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.

Very intriguing start. Well done author! The pace, word building, writing style are all good. It's still in the early phases of the story, and I look forward to more chapters from the author!

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So let me start by saying, the book cover alone made me want to read it and when I did I just had to keep it, am a huge fan of vampires so this book got me smiling, the ruthless vampire made my heart swell 😉keep up the good work author.

I've never been a fan of vampire based novels due to it being an over used genre or if used written about like some sloppy Twilight romance knock-off. But this is more gritty. Well done to the author for using a horse instead of flogging a dead one.

The story is amazing, I enjoyed reading the entire novel, so please keep the chapters and never leave it be. The characters are lovable for me, especially since I love this type of setting in a story. but... I don't mean to offend you or anything, but update the chapters and learn how to use correct punctuations.

Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!

Your style creates a sense of fear and excitement in the readers mind. The character design is just perfect. I am eager to read more of this novel, i have it has a lot of plot twists in store! The book cover is on fire! I got interested the moment i saw it. Added to library! I hope you exceed my expectations!

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Amazing start! And that's rarely a common occurrence among new novels. Nothing to say about the stability of updates, author is doing well. Characters well crafted thus far, easy to connect to them. World background also well developed. I can't wait to see more. A good read overall, keep it up, author-kun! I'll be looking forward to read what's yet to come.

I think everything about it is great; the authors writing stile, characters description, intriguing plotline, coupled with the attractive cover. I'll rate this novel five stars.

Amazing start! Exciting premise and the characters are portrayed realistically and are easy to connect to. I can't wait to see more. A great read on a lazy weekend. Good luck, author!

The story of a witch and vampire is really intriguing. Your writing is marvellous and the story plot is awesome. I really like the twists and turns of this story. I am looking for more chaps and recommend everyone to give this story a try.. you will love it💜😊 All the best and keep going author.🔥

Gabriel’s narcissistic personality really mirrors a pureblood vampire. His obsession to the girls gaves a mysterious effect to the novel. I really love how you described his personality. Keep up the good work author!

The world of vampires with the dark theme has always been my fav this story already got me hooked up not gonna lie. The MC is really scary T_T but still cant help to fall in love with him! cant wait to read what happens next!!

I really love the story. not a Vampire Fan but this one got me. hope to read more!!! I recommend this book. hope to read more. write soon. I can't read enough.

Action✔ Blood✔ Gore✔ Vampires✔ what more could you ask for? It's a fight between good and evil but not your typical one. The MC and the other characters are very well written and so far it has not disappointed in what it promises to offer!

Love the cover page! It's original and very catchy. First of all, I have to confess that vampires, elves, etc... that's not my cup of coffee, but I will try to be objective ;) The plot is intriguing, and I have got an impression from the first few chapters that you have an idea for the whole story (a huuuuge plus for that). Your characters are interesting, you describe the backgorund from the beginning. I think you're doing great! Don't worry about the errors, we all make them. Ask your readers to point it, so it will be easier for you to correct them. Good luck with the contest!

Rating it 5/5 :) Review after reading Chapter 5, (Actual chapter 5 lol) Some pointers: Writing quality. The author has a rich story to tell. Could use some proof reading but the lapses didn't affect the overall readability. Easy to understand too. If anything, I would suggest making the paragraphs not too lengthy. Sometimes, air quotes for character's dialogue make a paragraph too lengthy. A good style to shorten it and give more life to it is by starting the dialogue in a whole new paragraph. Story development. Has a strong start. Good exposition as it detailed not just the characters but the setting itself. The zeitgeist of the writing gave justice to the time setting. Good job! Character design is good and mysterious as the first chapter already gives a "problem" need solving, why his majesty is acting like that. The MC vampire king also maintains his (I could guess the author did it this way) narcissitic character. Overall, if the author could retain a proofreader's help, this will improve the writing tremendously as it already has a good plot and story. Another tip I just learned, perhaps you could make an Auxiliary chapter instead of putting the deleted chapter on Chapter 5, since auxiliary is always on top.

Wow, I like the back story very much. It is a unique one, and the era of time is also the 1950s. The paragraphs are kind of so tall, but it was fine. Highly recommendation keep going P.S: "she tasted sweet, like oranges, liquid sunshine in my mouth as we kissed, our tongues playing together.”.. oooh i like the description so cute.