This review is spectacular! Thank you for your honesty...I will take all of your tips to heart. Appreciated <3

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

Thank you very much for this honest review! I am actually working on the descriptions and hopefully I'll get good at them. Thanks again!

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This can only be rated by perfection! A five star can never be enough! It has been so long since I said something is a master piece and this is the perfect definition of one. I love the style, the descriptions, the creativity, and everything about this! Keep going cuz I can't wait for more!

Good luck!!

The total plot and idea of this is interesting. I could the author is feeling himself from the style and details. The author seems new to this, but I'm sure he'll get the hang of this after reviewing well. As I said the plot is decent, the scenes and characters are put together in a good way. This plot is promising and I'm impressed with the effort put in this for further improvements! Waiting for more...

I am actually really impressed by this story. Your style inspires me actually even though it is kinda hard hard writing in the tense you use, but you managed to nail that so points for that. There is a few grammatical errors, but only picky people would comment on that since your style and events cover all that ish up. Keep going, I love this, and you a great author! Also I am waiting for more to come!!

An exciting well plotted read. I love the character's design and the detailed description. The events are synchronized and put together. I am loving this and definitely waiting for more content!

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Thank you very much! I was really pleased that you got the message I was trying to send through the reader's consciousness! You're a great reader, thanks again!

I found it pretty fun, but possibly a little dated given many of those things aren't normal routines anymore. But the lessons to take from it are still powerful. Loved it! I want to sample some more books by this fine author

The hype around this book has been unquestionable and, admittedly, that made me both eager to get my hands on it and terrified to read it. I mean, what if I was to be the one person that didn’t love it as much as others? (That seems silly now because of how truly mesmerizing it turned out!) Because of the catchy synopsis, I knew this one was a must-read, so I was ready to set my fears aside and dive in. That said, I had an altogether more personal, ulterior motive for wanting to read this book.

Demetrius turned out a really great guy! (kinda crushing on him) Blue on the other hand, I feel like she suits him a lot! The style is confusing mysterious and ambiguous, but in the good way. This is promising. You have potential in your style and story. Added to library! PS wishing you luck in the competition!

This story is actually promising! I love your style though you could use some editing on the grammar and punctuation, BUT your style covers all that up. I would a 100% recommend Grammarly for some help! I love the details you put in the background, symbolizing a lot of stuff and foreshadowing future events. I have hella theories and expectations. I hope you exceed them all!!

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A very well written beginning! The story pulls you in, that's amazing! WOW! Every moment during the reading was dynamic and enjoyable to read. I just loved it! You're great keep that up!