Good novel, although there are some grammar mistakes the story and concept look very promising!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Hello there, thank you for reading my novel and to answer your question I would first like to point out that the absorb function rends the page which It was used on unusable for forty days, it was explained in Ch. 2 in the introduction page as Assimilating. I'll edit it into absorb. Alph was stuck in the forest with just two slaves, the orc and the draylion, since Dane was going through character development and when he joined Kane and the party he was very careful about using the grimoir in fear that they might discover it and it might cause a rift in their relationship. If you have read so far it should be clear that Alph never got the time and leisure to, unless my writing sucks and it does, try out the Absorb function. Now to the main topic, yes, Alph will soon be getting some power ups now that he is in a town and Dane, who is pretty OP right now, is at his beck and call. I hope I gave you satisfactory answer, thank you and please ask any question you have any time you want. I will do my best to satisfy my precious readers :)

Thank you! Yes, there are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors since I write on a cheap mobile phone that bugs a lot xD I will edit the chapters to my best. The cover is just some random image I found on Google edited with the novel title. I will commission an original book cover once I get some things settled :) I appreciate and thank you for your review ^^

I'm glad you like it :)

Action✔ Blood✔ Gore✔ Vampires✔ what more could you ask for? It's a fight between good and evil but not your typical one. The MC and the other characters are very well written and so far it has not disappointed in what it promises to offer!

Noooo! poor child!

Thank you for pointing out the spelling errors, I will find some time to go over all the chapter to resolve it. I will strive to improve and not let the readers down.

Overall a decent isekai novel. it takes the famous cliches a bends it to create something new. However, there is just one thing I would like to complain, the pace seemed a bit too fast for the first couple of chapters. would have been great if the MC' s character was explained in a bit more detail but it's just my opinion.

Welp, that was quite a fast pace xD

Truck-Kun Baka!

Great, a good ol modern day crime novel. Very good. although some characters get on my nerves sometimes they are written that way and written extremely well. A good blend of western-like plot with a more traditional Indian plot. Keep up the good work Author!

Boy has a point lol

I know where this I going xD poor mc...

Not gonna lie, I wasn't expecting much read the fire three chapters and I'm hooked. You might have found a new fan :) Also, I feel for the MC, lol.

Hello! It's my first time seeing a webnovel by another Pakistani! Although I'm not into romance novels, your writing quality and story is quite good. I would recommend it to those who like a good modern day action romance novel. P.S I would appreciate it if you check out my novel and please leave a review even if a negative one how I can improve. Thanks!

Hello there, I noticed use of an extra comma at the last part which is fine but I wanted to give my two cents on it. In my opinion, the sentence would have been better written like this: A girl stood in front of the mirror wearing a white gown, her wedding dress, looking at her own reflection while talking to herself. the use of a third comma looks a bit out of place, just my opinion, since I'm not expect in English or something xD

Why give it 4 stars then? is your pinion worth only 4stars? jk.

Hey man, I saw your review and I think that it's just a common troupe these days. But if you have the time and want to read something different you can check out the novel in writing. its only at 5 chapters now and I'm planning to release 6-7 chapters a week since I'm not a processional writer and it takes me some times to put the thought into words.