thanks for having read so far i agree with you tbh when i wrote, i didn't do it for the reader, i did it for myself

sorry what?

nobody ever is innocent son. people tried to kill him anyway. but yeah, mainly, for now, MC isn't an adult so he does that. wait and watch him grow up

thank you

YOU GOT IT

yeah it seems to be a thing with my book; readers get confused I'm glad you stuck with it too

I appreciate it man, really

yeah about other pov i got you covered there will be many important characters in this story glad you had a good time too that's great your comment about the aligning of authors with their MC is interesting. I never really thought about it but it makes sense people would do that. I actually do that too if you wanna know. MC's so immature for now cuz well that's the way he gotta be. wouldn't make sense to have him be super serious and stern about everything (I know you agree with me). I plan on a huge kind of character development for MC. by the end of the story, let's just say that he is different. really, really different. BUT ANYWAY, this was just me chatting about that. thank you for the advices, that's constructive. glad you read me

HAHAHAHA I can see you've got great expectations hmmmmm "HAHAHAHa" means I'm happy

ooooooh northernsnow ehehe~ what a pleasure to be meeting you that's the first comment I get from you I believe I should thank you for your support instead

WELL boy how'd you like it so far you must've covered all the first book by now was it all good? or not I don't get enough opinions from readers who read at least the first volume so you tell me

he'll forge himself his own identity. there will be romance yeah. about a harem, I don't tag the book #harem but there will be errmmmmmmmmmm how to put this? lots of romances with MC; so that's that. I could tag the book with harem but don't wanna.

I appreciate your comments man

well, throughout the story you'll see he isn't really stupid. it's not he isn't capable of thinking like an adult or anything. he only behaves childishly since it appears to be fun. naturally, he'll mature soon enough tho. like I said anyway, he isn't stupid in the sense he isn't capable of using his head, hm. he's just messing around ALOT for now; but he'll come around

HAHAHAHA I can relate to that oooooh do take care of yourself though

well wasn't that dude only that swordsman's sibling? not MC's duh

was prolly just tired dunno

thank you thank you

I'm the author and don't see this as constructive criticism, no. The MC is basically a baby at first. Just got his 'sense of self' on hand. He's not ruthless. When he kill humans he thinks that's just the way. That's what he's been taught right from the get-go. This is nurture. Well, there's a lot to tell; but with just this point, you can see your opinion is not founded at all. Anyway, thanks for reading the few you read, man. I appreciate it. About the writing quality not being to its top, I must agree with you. Thanks for your review too. I mean what I wrote with respect. To anyone who reads this, you should try and at least read the first book (it's entirely free) in its entirety. You can't see what the story will be like if you don't. Or at the very least the first 35 chapters or so. It's deeper than that above.

heh well then if its for you konan be prepared to see your baby grow into a man tho