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Thanks for the heads-up!
No, you're right it's meant to be ichor but for some reason Grammarly always notes it as a nonexistent word. I'll go over the chapters and reedit that.
No, with home I mean morr like a place he cares for and sees himself living in. He wants to live a proper life seeing that his previous one ended prematurely. That doesn't mean he will just stay still until he dies.
Almost all of my beginning chapters are way too short in my opinion. I didn't know the length of a chapter or how I wanted to pace my story. I'm thinking of finishing volume 1 (for which I have a basic outline) before going back and reediting. If you find any other aspects of the story confusing or a bit glossed over be sure to point them out as it will significantly help me in refining my writing style.
I also share your opinion that my chapters are way too short. That's something I slowly am trying to change as I start feeling more comfortable on how to write. Descriptions idem. I will probably go back and re-edit once I come to a point where the story could take a break (probably after first volume).
I always appreciate feedback on grammatical errors. So thnx for pointing this out.