Reviews of Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline

In regard to what the author need to work on the most, and issues that I found in the novel are mainly grammars, punctuation, and spelling issues. From the beginning to the latest chapters, I found a lot of words that were spell incorrectly or that the words doesn't match the intention of the sentence. As for punctuation, there some sentence in paragraphs that I found needed period more than commas, and vice versa. For the author I did two to three examples with give in-comments suggestions. But I think the author should go back and reread (edit) the chapters again because almost to, but not all chapters had more than three to four grammar issues. But not to be discourage, not all author are grammar-free. No matter how good a novel is, at least one to two reader will probably find mistaken somewhere. As for the story development, and character design. I think the author did well in pacing between bring in new characters and describing the setting despite their given names. I wonder how does the author came up with names for his/her characters and settings( city, town, object, etc.) very creative indeed. Finally, for world background I was debating if the world is a modern futuristic world with magic, or an old time (ancient) world with magic. Not sure, but it was surprising to read to a part that seem to modern, but is not. In overall, the author did great in setting the novel in a way that pull the reader in. However, grammars and spelling mistake is the thorn on the side that probably makes it hard for reader to stay. But nonetheless, keep up the good work. Fighting!

I LIKE IT. This book so far is well written and and interesting. The thing about adventure stories are that they tend to throw you with a lot of information at once. A lot of characters introductions quickly. What I do like about this story is that it's fast paced and that things happen the whole time. Hope you keep writing and finish the story. That's what matters most. One thing I would recommend is that you go back and separate the characters "speech" sentences with at least two line spaces. Don't try to put a conversation with multiple people in one paragraph. But I'm adding to my library to see where this goes.

The world-building is very good. It gives me a sorcerous vibe. It felt like 'The Hobbit.' Anyway, the novel overall is good is of good quality. Just improve the writing quality

The story is so sweet I like the way you blend the imagination into this world and the perfect way of describing it for me and I'm slowly starting to fall in love with it ❤️❤️❤️

The story is awesome. The world building started from the very first chapter and character development was good too. There were some grammatical errors but you can improve it later. Good work author. I loved it.

I think this book has potential, the world building are super nice, the characters and plot got my attention, the grammar could improve in time, Just keep up the great job dear author. Fighting! 😃

The story has a lot of potentials, author-san. But the grammatical mistakes made me unable to continue further. I strongly recommend you to use Grammarly. Even I use that app to check if there are any mistakes in the chap before uploading it. As for the story, it is good so far. Keep up your good work, author. It will take some time to improve in everything. I've been writing for more than 2 years. But still, I make a few grammatical mistakes in each chapter. Anyway, good luck.

Loved the suspense from the beginning, instantly I knew there was going to be a nice buildup to whatever epicness was coming. I liked the fantastical elements, they were well written for me to visualize every detail in my head as I read. Great story, keep making chapters!

While reading this I was having this dark kind of vibes... Hey, the story was very mysterious at first read, must say. It makes you wonder what's more in it, and understand what the dra'ghoul all about. Psst, every time I read dra'ghoul my mind always went to a zombie-like dragon or ghoul dragon. All in all, very impressive! Kudos to the author!

After reading it, I can tell you that it has a fantastic plot. However, there are several punctuation issues and spelling errors. To avoid these, you should proofread the book. These kinds of errors, you know, can be a turn off for some readers. I wish you the best of luck!

This story is very very stylish and immersive. You are immediately teleported to this land of high sorcery. The characters are clearly portrayed and you can feel their motivations. Story is well paced. The best part is the world building. This is complimented by the writing. The vocabulary of choice is congruous to the setting. I must say there are some grammatical errors, but they do not impede reading and are not something that cannot be cleaned with simple editing. Thank you, author. It will stay in my library! :D

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.

The story seems to have interesting lore and the descriptions seem to be solid. On the other hand, the formatting of this story could use some work in terms of punctuation and grammar. Wishing you the best on your journey author.

This novel has a lot of potential It would be good if there are a lot of chapters in it. the development of the main is good. keep up updating the story.

A very good spin on the synopsis. The characterisation seems promising enough, A lot of potential to turn into something. Keep up the good work.

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An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!

The plotline is good, but there are a few grammatical errors. There is also a lot of misuse and lack of punctuation marks that needed to fix. The story was good so far. Revising those errors would improve the quality of your work and also help the readers.

Great book, well written story, excellent creativity and interseting plot. Chapters have the power to pull the readers attraction from the very beginning. The flow of the story is great, engaging, and easy to understand. The only problem is the writing quality. Like capitalization of letters, commas, etc. Which can be improve with time. All and all though, the work has a great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.

The story is really intriguing. I really like how the author portrays the characters and conflicts of the story. The only thing that I'd like to point out is the writing quality. There are some commas that are missing and capitilisation of letters were done wrong. However, with enough editting of the chapter, I know that this story would become more amazing as it is. Kudos for the author!