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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora1d
    Replied to hiddennoir

    Yup, I could have written that; and I was about to make him at around the age of 15 or 16. Howwweveeer, It will be so unrealistic if he was mature for his age when he is still 14 yrs old (15 or 16). So, I kinda placed him in the normal age group (18) and settled for that. But your suggestion is still running inside my mind, and I would like to take that into consideration. Thank you~

    "You can still see them one day."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora1d
    Replied to kirto24
    [Deity]-{Level 2: 0/5,000 Exp} ***Talk to the bald bastard
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora1d
    Replied to Xien_xien

    Thank you very much, mate! ^^

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora1d
    Replied to varean
    Immediately, I kick the man's groins and hurdle the lady away from his bounds. Luckily, the guy voices out his pain and swiftly places both of his hands and shielded his genitals.
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora1d
    Replied to TheDolphin

    We all have different taste, and that's fine.

    "You have fought well, brave soul. In return, let me use your power for the greater good."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Replied to TRAINING_I_AM

    Thanks, mate ^^

    "H20, hydrogen monoxide, the components of water," I mumble. "Imagine these atoms combining into one."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Replied to TRAINING_I_AM

    Yep, he still can. However, Blake was depressed and, although it wasn't mentioned in the story, he haven't eaten a proper meal for 3 days. Hence, his lack of energy fighting back against the abductor.

    However, the armed man instantly recovers and aimlessly points his gun towards the victim's location. Sacrificing my life, I intuitively prance over to her fore and shielded the bullet using my hovering body. I can feel my muscle tensing and squeezing from the pain and suffering of the object inside of me.
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    kuhaku_sora2d
    Replied to TRAINING_I_AM
    "I am going to die, anyway. I might as well die as a hero." I confidently told myself and gingerly headed towards the back ends of the hallway where I saw a functioning closed-circuit television.
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Replied to TRAINING_I_AM
    "Next week," I murmur to myself. "I will do it for sure."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Posted

    A lovable novel, I must say. Rose, The first few sentences can easily catch the reader's eyes, and the romance plot is really interesting once readers reaches at the climax of the story (although I have only read a couple of chapters of the book, I can tell that the story is amazing.

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Posted

    You have an interesting plot with an outstanding book cover! I like how the author creates the conflict and would be later on fixed while the story progresses. The passion is there, and I could bet it would reward you soon! The only advises that I can give you are few suggestion to edit the paragraphs from here and there. There are missing and numerous commas, your and you're (difference between words), and some sentences that are slightly difficult to understand. But don't be down because English is an arduous thing to learn. In no time, you will notice these errors and fix them in due time! Nevertheless, I believe that that story has some potential, and I invite you all to read this book

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Commented

    Calm her down! HAHAHA

    " WHAT THE FUCKING HELL ARE YOU PLANNING TO DO WITH YOUR LIFE? DON'T YOU HAVE ANYTHING TO DO BUT TO GET YOURSELF DRUNK every time YOU GET HOME? WE NO LONGER HAVE ANYTHING TO EAT, AND YET ALL YOUR GOING TO DO IS THIS? YOU DON'T EARN ENOUGH FROM YOUR CONSTRUCTION JOB, AND YET YOU STILL HAVE TIME TO FUCKING WASTE YOUR MONEY? IF THIS FUCKING CONTINUE, THEN JUST GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HOUSE!" my mom yelled at my dad in the living room.
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora2d
    Replied to RexHarris

    I should have written centimetres or metres away, but I wanted to place a sort of metaphor for the distance, showing that the presence of the gun (where Blake had first seen it) was afar; describing his keen eyesight.

    With a fork concealed behind my hand, I decided to end my life by slitting myself on the neck, precisely in my jugular veins. But, before I can even raise my item, I notice a man wielding a gun from miles away.
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora3d
    Replied to system
    "You have fought well, brave soul. In return, let me use your power for the greater good."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora3d
    Replied to Franco98

    Oh, ejaculated means saying something suddenly. I wanted to write that for the memes (and it fits fine for the sentence wkwkwk)

    "I thought he would kill me," I ejaculated. "I guess I get to keep my second life."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora3d
    Replied to Doomsday2666

    do a flip do a flip HAHAHA

    "Next week," I murmur to myself. "I will do it for sure."
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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora4d
    Replied to DiperZ

    *i am sorry for replying using the english language (because i dont want to googletranslate anything Iwould say, and i dont trust google translate that much). the reason behind Blake/Lake going with the humans is because he doesnt want to be affiliated with the rest of the goblins. His goal is to make a name for himself for the deity that he met from before. He also wants to revive his family and doesn't want to live in the den of goblins where they rape or abuse women. Grer and Izz are special (this is somewhat a spoiler) is because of his system. They are the first party members that Lake's system invited. Hence, they are both intellegient creatures that resembles human nature. However, I will add twist soon in the story, and I hope that you, readers, would enjoy it! thank you for the review, and I hope I can bring more adventurous spirit inside of you! and have a nice day~

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora4d
    Replied to varean

    Thank youu ^-^

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora4d
    Replied to Decree_Woods

    Thanks, mate! ^^

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  • kuhaku_sora
    kuhaku_sora4d
    Posted

    I am a sucker for isekai story lines, so I wil lgive this novel 5 thumbs up! The plot has a promising story, together with the setting and art style paired on the cover. I really love how the author expresses his/her thoughts and adds multiple words to bring light to the story. The onyl advise that I can is that there are some lines that needs commas, periods, semicolons, and dashes that might help to describe the story. Also, it will be great if you can post the author's thoughts on the author's notes when writing the chapters. I have only a single chapter for this book, and Im quite impressed by the flow of the story. Good job author, and good luck on your story!

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