Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline

The story is really intriguing. I really like how the author portrays the characters and conflicts of the story. The only thing that I'd like to point out is the writing quality. There are some commas that are missing and capitilisation of letters were done wrong. However, with enough editting of the chapter, I know that this story would become more amazing as it is. Kudos for the author!