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min_jasmine

min_jasmine

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2020-12-18 JoinedAlgeria
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Posted

    I put a quarter of stars on the world design only because I don't like this type of world very much, sorry In addition to that, the story is wonderful. I love that the hero of the story is not a white lotus like other novels, and in addition, his internal expressions are very wonderful.

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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    we will see

    "Don't worry sensei il prove to them I'm not useless" After saying bye to her I go home excited to try out the VR pod.
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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    Better than nothing💁🏻‍♀️

    "Not bad for garbage even though you don't have a legacy you're strength isn't too bad. You have just enough to pass the quota to enter the F Classes Range from F-A. The S and up classes are almost impossible to get into. The school had 7 years to attend before being able to graduate.
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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    The speed of changing the face, no one can match it

    "It's fine miss I don't have a legacy so it won't light up." Instantly her face twisted into one of revulsion. In a disrespectful tone, she said "No wonder why it didn't light up. You're useless. A pig is more useful than you. To even think I let you stare at my ass. A frog lusting after a swan's meat."
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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    As they say, “the Beauty have no luck.”

    Washing my face, I looked in the mirror. I can't say I'm bad-looking but handsomeness won't help me once I get to school. I
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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    I feel like he has relationship with this

    There were gifts from our ancestors. Each person was a descendant of someone in history, and we inherited their abilities. It wasn't until 30 Thousand Years ago we discovered legacies. That day was known as the Apocalypse. Aliens invaded Earth killing 50% of the population. Women, and children, all slaughtered in cold blood, the screams still having remnants echoing through today among their decsendants
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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Commented

    Evil character, I like that

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    Mythological Legacy
    Anime & Comics · DiBltzy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    The story is so sweet I like the way you blend the imagination into this world and the perfect way of describing it for me and I'm slowly starting to fall in love with it ❤️❤️❤️

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    Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline
    Fantasy · Brandongould
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Benny_Manatee

    Thank you for telling me, actually, as i said, English is not my native language, I usually use a translator, and I try to proofread as much as possible, but that's not enough, it seems, I don't have the money for an editor, so that's all I can do 🥺🥺 Anyway thank you very much

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    Steps on the slope
    Horror · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Brandongould

    Thank you very much for your honest review. I am very grateful .. In fact, the classification of the Glosali novel is not a horror for you. I did not find a more suitable classification for it other than this. The novel is considered an investigation, but certainly not a horror If you see a more appropriate classification, please let me know I will work on your advice and expand the description of the world. Thanks again

    altalt
    Steps on the slope
    Horror · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to min_jasmine
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    Temptation Chronicles
    Urban · Benny_Manatee
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    I have read several chapters of it so far and I liked it as not to lie, the first chapter was very boring for me, but after reaching the second chapter, I found that the events became better and more interesting As for the character of the hero, I feel that his acceptance of the idea that he was a murderer was rather quick but still acceptable.. In short, the novel is nice and you may enjoy it when you have free time (note: i fell in love with the old man)

    altalt
    Temptation Chronicles
    Urban · Benny_Manatee
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    Nice story At first I thought it was the same routine betrayal scene but somehow it was for redemption, I didn't know who I should be angry at. keep up your hard work

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    Asher's Destiny
    Fantasy · InfinitelySleepy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    In fact, I liked the way you presented a novel and built great expectations on it But my expectations were all wrong. The novel is much better than I expected The character of the hero or the way you blend the present and the past...everything is great[img = يوصي]

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    THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST
    Horror · Adwaid_Nambiar
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    Your writing style is perfect, I don't see any flaws, whether in the description or the development of events But why does a weak omega have to live all this? I got to the fifth chapter and I feel like my eyes are already burning me Looks like I'll cry soon

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    He Hates Me, He Loves Me Not
    LGBT+ · 99blueroses
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Posted

    The novel is very nice, I liked the character of Raziel and his friend It's amazing how you combined the narration and the description It made me feel like I'm living events (your style is perfect)

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    The To-Do List
    LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Spities

    Yes Babylon song is very wonderful The strange thing is that he is singing a slightly similar English song that I didn't know about except in the comments It's nice to hear the song

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Dark_Scholars

    Yes, I am a person who is hostile to sad endings - unless it is necessary - I might make you cry the whole story but I'll give a decent ending

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Black_Wolfie

    Yes, it happens because of the use of Google Translate I will try to check when I have time Thank you for reminding me

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2yr
    Replied to Black_Wolfie

    I do not know who recommended the story to you, but I thank him in my place Your words are so kind and they make me happy even if I don't understand them at first

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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