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min_jasmine

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2020-12-18 JoinedAlgeria
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Posted

    Nice story At first I thought it was the same routine betrayal scene but somehow it was for redemption, I didn't know who I should be angry at. keep up your hard work

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    Asher's Destiny: Beginnings End
    Fantasy · InfinitelySleepy
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine2mth
    Posted

    In fact, I liked the way you presented a novel and built great expectations on it But my expectations were all wrong. The novel is much better than I expected The character of the hero or the way you blend the present and the past...everything is great[img = يوصي]

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    THE 7TEEN: LET THE PAIN EXIST
    Horror&Thriller · Adwaid_Nambiar
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine3mth
    Posted

    Your writing style is perfect, I don't see any flaws, whether in the description or the development of events But why does a weak omega have to live all this? I got to the fifth chapter and I feel like my eyes are already burning me Looks like I'll cry soon

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    He Hates Me, He Loves Me Not
    LGBT+ · 99blueroses
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine3mth
    Posted

    The novel is very nice, I liked the character of Raziel and his friend It's amazing how you combined the narration and the description It made me feel like I'm living events (your style is perfect)

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    The To-Do List
    Fantasy Romance · Dark_Scholars
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine3mth
    Replied to Spities

    Yes Babylon song is very wonderful The strange thing is that he is singing a slightly similar English song that I didn't know about except in the comments It's nice to hear the song

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine3mth
    Replied to Dark_Scholars

    Yes, I am a person who is hostile to sad endings - unless it is necessary - I might make you cry the whole story but I'll give a decent ending

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Black_Wolfie

    Yes, it happens because of the use of Google Translate I will try to check when I have time Thank you for reminding me

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Black_Wolfie

    I do not know who recommended the story to you, but I thank him in my place Your words are so kind and they make me happy even if I don't understand them at first

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Mel_Aniv

    I haven't finished reading your story yet Due to my preoccupation with school and studying, so I will continue reading it now

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Posted

    Thanks for reading my story guys I know there are many shortcomings My mother tongue is Arabic and English is the fourth language in my country so I am not good at it so sorry In general, I love you

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Posted

    I have created a way of narration that makes it simple and smooth even for someone like me and that is very cool As for the way you describe you, you made me feel that I am part of the story, and this for me is a powerful force for you

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    Mated To The Enemy: Loving The Wolf
    Fantasy Romance · Khawla_Amini
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Posted

    At first I thought it was the prototype story of Sanderella But as events unfolded and with all the Greek gods that made me feel strange I do not deny that the story was amazing, whether how you combined dream and truth or from how you narrated the story so that you make the reader live the events of the story. You did a great job

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    Into the abyss
    Fantasy Romance · Hiwaga
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to MizA

    Thank you, that's nice words from you I know it is not good enough but I will try to improve it over time

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to catvi

    Nice idea I am not satisfied with the last chapter because I wrote it in a hurry due to studying so when I finish I will definitely amend it Thank you for your kind review

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to MizA

    welcome

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    Inferno Ascended
    Fantasy · MizA
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Mavier

    I am one of the biggest fans of BTS

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Mavier

    Actually, I am not good at English so all I can do is use google traduction Thanks any way

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Replied to Mavier

    What do you think about the way the narration and the characters?

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    You made me cry
    LGBT+ · min_jasmine
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Posted

    The novel is interesting You created a world of your own, so it was great to explore it and dig deeper into its mysteries Anyone who loves action and fighting to gain power This is the place for you

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    Inferno Ascended
    Fantasy · MizA
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  • min_jasmine
    min_jasmine4mth
    Commented

    disgusting

    And the source of the funny and horrible smell of burning was the half-cooked and roasted bodies of warriors, similar to the big guy standing by his side. Some still held their spears and swords. Blisters covered their skins, reddened and blackened, and some suffered even greater damage.
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    Inferno Ascended
    Fantasy · MizA
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