Review Detail of Sun23 in Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline

In regard to what the author need to work on the most, and issues that I found in the novel are mainly grammars, punctuation, and spelling issues. From the beginning to the latest chapters, I found a lot of words that were spell incorrectly or that the words doesn't match the intention of the sentence. As for punctuation, there some sentence in paragraphs that I found needed period more than commas, and vice versa. For the author I did two to three examples with give in-comments suggestions. But I think the author should go back and reread (edit) the chapters again because almost to, but not all chapters had more than three to four grammar issues. But not to be discourage, not all author are grammar-free. No matter how good a novel is, at least one to two reader will probably find mistaken somewhere. As for the story development, and character design. I think the author did well in pacing between bring in new characters and describing the setting despite their given names. I wonder how does the author came up with names for his/her characters and settings( city, town, object, etc.) very creative indeed. Finally, for world background I was debating if the world is a modern futuristic world with magic, or an old time (ancient) world with magic. Not sure, but it was surprising to read to a part that seem to modern, but is not. In overall, the author did great in setting the novel in a way that pull the reader in. However, grammars and spelling mistake is the thorn on the side that probably makes it hard for reader to stay. But nonetheless, keep up the good work. Fighting!