Review Detail of Ak02 in Arran Ember the last of the Dra'ghoul Bloodline

The story has a lot of potentials, author-san. But the grammatical mistakes made me unable to continue further. I strongly recommend you to use Grammarly. Even I use that app to check if there are any mistakes in the chap before uploading it. As for the story, it is good so far. Keep up your good work, author. It will take some time to improve in everything. I've been writing for more than 2 years. But still, I make a few grammatical mistakes in each chapter. Anyway, good luck.