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A fascinating premise, the main protagonist, seemed likeable enough as of chapter 5. The story pacing is good, not too fast or not too slow. Found little to no grammatical errors. One valid criticism I can give is that you can try to change the cover picture of the novel. TBH, readers see the cover pic of novels and decide if they want to read it or not, regardless of how well crafted it is So I suggest you get a dedicated cover art for this novel.