Comments of chapter undefined of The Bet

The story is getting better with your edits. I just wonder how great the novel will be when you improve the story line.

Wow great story! I will review your book the second time around so please make a review to my book The Path Of Mastering All Job Class. Happy reviewing!

Sighs... those drunk bets, never ends well... hehehe

Interesting...

This first chapter is making me curious already... I'm excited for the next chapters🤗

Lol those drinks got her into the mess !

I liked the way you are paying attention to the smallest details. Great work :)

Very descriptive. However, who is she?

love how the story begins, we already have a feel of the promise of the premise. nice job

The first chapter is quite short but I have to commend you for good grammar and neat sentence structures ;) While we're at it, we are actually the same. I write stories in my native language and a few short stories in English as the language that I learned. It's a bit hard at first but with practice, it's getting better All the best for both of us! ;)

Of course added to my library. It's interesting

frickin bet. I thought there will be an accident lol

Prolouge does a nice job of setting of the setting and leaves you wondering what will happen next!

I loved this first chapter and the description was so good I think you have done an excellent job even though English is not your native language.

You know what you want to write, but the issue is grammar and incomplete sentences. I think you publish without editing them? Write and post? That's totally fine, but sometimes reading your story out loud helps with editing. If it doesn't roll off the tongue smoothly, then change it. Besides that, I think you're good. The idea and the thought are there for the readers to recreate and reimagine. Just keep writing and you'll improve. I was like you when I started since English wasn't my native language. Goodluck to you!

Interesting start indeed

You got me curious already!

Very nice

seems interesting.