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SeverusMagicus

SeverusMagicus

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2021-01-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus2yr
    Replied to Alexandra_An

    There is no Polish language in Web Novel I think.

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    The Bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Commented

    Hey JoJ, I think you are writing great, like expected. What do you think about my novel? Could I improve it a little bit?

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    The Bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to hostile_fire

    Thanks for your review. I’ll try to fix the grammar mistakes as much as possible. Have a nice day.

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Commented

    Hello everyone, can you give feedback about the novel? Thanks for the feedbacks and have a nice day.

    Ch 50 Powerful Magic
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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    Good story, author did well when writing the story line. The characters are well explained and there are many details in the story which makes the book good.

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    Our Happiness
    Teen · basementerz
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to basementerz

    Thanks for the review have a nice day

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Commented

    Story continues good.

    Ch 12 A victory
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    The Bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Love_Oreos

    Thanks for your comment. Have a nice day.

    Ch 1 Wake Up Traveler
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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    Hello everyone! I’m editing some chapters to fix the missing details of the story and also creating some connection between the chapters. Have a nice day.

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    I’m glad to hear that. And 30 chapters is amazing waiting for you to update the story :)

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    You are so right about this thing, I will focus on that but this will take some time. I’m looking foward to see a new chapter in your book, when will you update? :)

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    You are so right about the improvements, thanks for your help Jo_j!

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    Then let’s improve the story a little bit more.

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    You are right about it a lot, let’s see what can I do about this.

    No one talked with each other on the road. Actually Arthur tried to talk with Elizabeth a couple of times but when he started a conversation the talk ended somehow.
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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    Thanks I will try to fix them as much as possible. Have a nice day.

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    The story is really good, really powerful. The story telling and also the characters are all very well designed. You should read this novel.

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    UNavailable
    Teen · Lexi_Roberson
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    First of all the novel is really interesting. It has a good story and also a great character representation. You should read this novel. Also I have to say that author is always trying to improve the story, you can see it with the author comments and other things. Keep up the good work!

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    VRMMO Dodgeball
    Games · SweetRambutan
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Posted

    The story is really great. Author’s writing style is also really good. The story line on the other hand is magnificent. You should read this book.

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    Weak to Strong : The Hybrid
    Sci-fi · Khawla_Amini
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  • SeverusMagicus
    SeverusMagicus3yr
    Replied to Khawla_Amini

    Thanks for your review, I’ll try to make it as good as it is like that in every new chapter. Have a nice day.

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    Maze of the Forgotten Masters
    Fantasy · SeverusMagicus
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