A great intro chapter btw took me by surprise! about the novel- Has regular updating stability, Good grasp on the concept, drama and sequence of events portayed realistically, has cool description of world background, characters are finely crafted minced with emotions. All in all the novel is a good read!
I really love the mecha fight scenes in the chaps I read so far! they were described very well 👍 about the novel- has a futuristic setting, cool description with realistic details, maintains a good flow no matter if dialogues or war scenes. the characters are sketched well complementing the plotline. I hope this novel gets big!
great story you have got there author! about the novel- War military,has fantasy, well written plot line with characters sketched out finely, well tailored sequence of events plus has a a fine flow. Readers will like it in a single by read!
wow Re:Zero fan! me too😅 I could feel the vibes of the manga hehe about the book- an intriguing plot with finely grated sequence of events occurring one after the other, strong protagonist with individual personality, well thought out concept portrayed nicely through its characters.
An unique concept which is a perk of the novel. The plotline is well written and thought out, with griping events followed by a strong protagonist the novel has great potential!
A futuristic plus dystopian setting! Interesting I really like how the whole book progresses. The plotline is well constructed, has a nice background development with the perfect amount of romance to balance out the flow of the plot. A suggestion would be to make improvements on typos here and there, with fleshing out of the situations where necessary.
Very interesting book! Really enjoyed! A great book with well defined storyline, a cool protagonist followed by a load of interesting stuff happening throughout.
A novel of great concept along with enticingly tailored plot. The novel has action, strong protagonist, revenge and is dramatically well presented.
Wow I love books with system mine one has it too(sorry gave away spoiler) 😅 About the novel- Well constructed world background, intensifying plotline, intricately designed characters, consists of mystery, comedy, suspense, action and is dramatically tailored.
wow I love the book, a concept I read in mangas but in a story from is something new😍 About the novel- First person narrative, unique portryal of protagonists, slice of life events, sarcasm, good people & bad people, fate is the factor, mystery, romance, comedy so and so. Plot line well written has intricately tailored world back ground. Suggestions- Keep those unhealthy typos under check, I'm suffering too (lol) one suggestion is stick to your own imagination and keep flaunting like you already are doing! keep up the good work 👍