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_AiRen_

_AiRen_

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2018-01-06 JoinedIndia
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_2d
    Posted

    A great intro chapter btw took me by surprise! about the novel- Has regular updating stability, Good grasp on the concept, drama and sequence of events portayed realistically, has cool description of world background, characters are finely crafted minced with emotions. All in all the novel is a good read!

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    World Dream
    FantasyBlue_Crow
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_2d
    Replied to Blue_Crow

    thank you I'm working on it 馃憤

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    The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
    Fantasy Romance_AiRen_
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_2d
    Posted

    I really love the mecha fight scenes in the chaps I read so far! they were described very well 馃憤 about the novel- has a futuristic setting, cool description with realistic details, maintains a good flow no matter if dialogues or war scenes. the characters are sketched well complementing the plotline. I hope this novel gets big!

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    The Verlusian Conspiracy
    War&MilitaryTheTradeMaker
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_2d
    Posted

    great story you have got there author! about the novel- War military,has fantasy, well written plot line with characters sketched out finely, well tailored sequence of events plus has a a fine flow. Readers will like it in a single by read!

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    War, Elements, and Magic
    Fantasy RomanceNeatio
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_2d
    Posted

    wow Re:Zero fan! me too馃槄 I could feel the vibes of the manga hehe about the book- an intriguing plot with finely grated sequence of events occurring one after the other, strong protagonist with individual personality, well thought out concept portrayed nicely through its characters.

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    The Lightning Element's Chosen One
    Fantasyaigaakabane14
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Posted

    An unique concept which is a perk of the novel. The plotline is well written and thought out, with griping events followed by a strong protagonist the novel has great potential!

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    Ascension: Legend of the Blue Deity
    FantasyJay_Blu
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Posted

    A futuristic plus dystopian setting! Interesting I really like how the whole book progresses. The plotline is well constructed, has a nice background development with the perfect amount of romance to balance out the flow of the plot. A suggestion would be to make improvements on typos here and there, with fleshing out of the situations where necessary.

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    My Promise From The Pale Death God
    Contemporary RomanceLaDiDah
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Replied to LaDiDah

    Thank you so much 鉂

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    The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
    Fantasy Romance_AiRen_
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Posted

    Very interesting book! Really enjoyed! A great book with well defined storyline, a cool protagonist followed by a load of interesting stuff happening throughout.

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    The Mafia Bosses Bodyguard
    Contemporary RomanceKHRIKY
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Replied to KHRIKY

    Well I'm so sorry for that馃槄 i thank you for your appreciation

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    The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Posted

    A novel of great concept along with enticingly tailored plot. The novel has action, strong protagonist, revenge and is dramatically well presented.

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    Demoniac
    FantasyDarkseidEquation
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Posted

    Wow I love books with system mine one has it too(sorry gave away spoiler) 馃槄 About the novel- Well constructed world background, intensifying plotline, intricately designed characters, consists of mystery, comedy, suspense, action and is dramatically tailored.

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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
    Fantasy Romancemozza_mello
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    I hid myself among the mages, the safest place to be. After observing for quite a while, I discovered something strange. If I focus, I could see some kind of auras around them and the monsters. When they attack, the aura gets stronger and they clash.
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    "Ice orcs! Two in front and one on the right!" Jeanne shouted, "tanks, charge forward and mages, cast your buff on the tanks!"
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    Please fucking don't. Don't kill me. If I die at least I don't want it to be this painful and weird. At this rate my fake tears might as well become real ones. Guilty conscience, please do your magic!
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    Crap, is she not buying it? I'll have to try again.
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
    Fantasy Romancemozza_mello
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    "I don't remember anything, Miss... When I woke up, I only remember my name..." I said as I look up to her with my best teary puppy eyes. Yes, I'm gonna pretend I'm a weak, harmless stranger who lost her memories. That way they would probably leave me alone and won't question my behaviors. Please believe me, please believe me...
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_3d
    Commented
    My head turns towards the source of that smooth-sounding voice. Instead of a person, I'm greeted by... swords?
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    Earth's Doom Starts with... Me?
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_4d
    Replied to phoenixhyperion

    yeah grammars I call them unhealthy 馃槄 because they make me suffer too

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    The Matchmaker who can see the red string of fate
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  • _AiRen_
    _AiRen_4d
    Posted

    wow I love the book, a concept I read in mangas but in a story from is something new馃槏 About the novel- First person narrative, unique portryal of protagonists, slice of life events, sarcasm, good people & bad people, fate is the factor, mystery, romance, comedy so and so. Plot line well written has intricately tailored world back ground. Suggestions- Keep those unhealthy typos under check, I'm suffering too (lol) one suggestion is stick to your own imagination and keep flaunting like you already are doing! keep up the good work 馃憤

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    The Matchmaker who can see the red string of fate
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