Butterscotch_07
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Butterscotch_073yrReplied to Jo_JCh 11 Chapter 11- Butterscotch_073yrReplied to Jo_JCh 17 Chapter17
- Butterscotch_073yrReplied to PrincessDustbunny
it's kind of a fantasy world, but unfortunately, this is still a real situation in some areas... so how you take it is up to you :)
He decided that she'd be hanged so that there won't be any black spot on their family name. - Butterscotch_073yrReplied to PrincessDustbunny
nope... Steven. what I meant was she was already there waiting when he was escorted by her sisters. :)
At night, Steven was escorted by her siblings to her room. She sat there waiting as nervousness snuck onto her. She heard her husband ('her husband') getting teased by her siblings, heard him patiently answering each and every one of them and saying goodbye to them and the door creaked. - Butterscotch_073yrReplied to PrincessDustbunny
Yup. There's a backstory. Wait for it ;)
Serena looked at her friend, shocked. She couldn't believe that someone like him wanted to marry her. But soon Molly's words came true. - Butterscotch_073yrReplied to PrincessDustbunny
No, I really appreciate the suggestions. I'll try to improve it... I'm a newbie after all, and I am here to learn. so, thanks.
On such a pleasant day, a girl could be seen sitting lazily on a tree by the riverside. She had long hair that reached her waist and flowed lightly with the breeze. Slender legs were dangling from the branch that she was perched on as she sat there with her back leaning on the trunk. Although her face was half-hidden with the hat she wore, you could see the clear skin, an elegantly straight nose, and plump red lips half curved in a smile. A sound of footsteps was heard and broke her trance. She turned her face towards the newcomer. - Butterscotch_073yrReplied to PrincessDustbunny
Thanks for your help. I'll try to improve accordingly 😀
When they reached her house, there was a big crowd in the front. Being a village head's dwelling, it was nothing new for them to see so many people at the same time in their house, but this time it felt somewhat different. The visitors appeared to be from the city. There was an expensive-looking car parked outside her home. The person sitting with her father wore a suit and sat there looking elegant like a model. As soon as her father saw her, he signaled her to come towards them. - Butterscotch_073yrReplied to Alexandra_AnCh 1 Chapter 1
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- Butterscotch_073yrReplied to chelsearaenavyCh 7 Chapter 7
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- Butterscotch_073yrReplied to Aella_StormwindCh 1 Chapter 1