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HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton (GOT and HP crossover)

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Harry Potter dies at the age of 28 in an accident by falling through the Veil. His soul travels through dimensions and end up in the body of 7 year old Domeric Bolton who recently died due to a horse accident. Plus, If you like my work and want to support me, then please do so at- patreon.com/ankit1 Upto 100 additional chapters in Patreon.

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This is admittedly the first GoT fanfic I have ever read, so I'm not too sure about how it is handled normally. For me GoT is too much action to handle the butterfly effect🤷🏻‍♂️. The following may include some spoilers** Writing quality: our author is using the English language better than nearly all the translators here on WN ( what admittedly isn't too hard). Still some spelling mistakes are there and the vocabulary used is still in the middle stages. Stability of update: well there are 5 (when short) chapters per day. I would say nobody could complain about this one. I am still wondering how writers can produce that much text in this little time. Far from record holding but still an archivement here. Story development: * The story is a bit of an wish-come-true type. Personally, for reading it as a relaxing novel. It's not bad, even if it seems like he has a much to easy time getting what he wants. (*Spoiler-slight* Example: using legimens and oblivate to steal riches / using portkeys without end . And to not forget the most important part: he is getting rid of any backstabbing, by simply using magic, Theron destroying one of the pillars of GoT ) Character design:* spoiler* Our MC is Harry potter transmigrated to got, but somehow he doesn't behave like Harry at all. He is much to easy about using the forbidden spells, knowing his way about nearly every lore there is ( wandlore/warding etc) and obviously something in the past changed. Some other characters are induced(never play any role in the original series (what is not a bad point) but somehow instantly outshine their original counterparts. World background: * spoiler* The basics of GoT with all those secrets he managed to include. Which itself is an archivement! Again he has a bit too much information ( all of it) which is a bit boring, but makes the story predictable. Conclusion: Even if it didn't sound like it, I think the story has the basics to be a good read. One of the only ones I am still actively reading on WN. (Too much wuxia Here) The 'harry' could be changed to something else, only the magic part would be important.

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