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SuzakuOkita
SuzakuOkitaLv54yr
2020-06-20 21:13

Its not Harry Poter we know . Its not world Got we know. Autor try make somthing magical but he fail. Charakters have no soul like wood pupets. They not funyy . Mc dont have magic from HP . He weak but can do anything what autor can think. to big plot armor. Mc why HP?? better give Mc random name random guy from earth....

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Cultreevation
CultreevationLv10

Well I agree with your opinion, but have to say, you really should prove read your comments. Like really.

saad_alhilali
saad_alhilaliLv1

Lol you should *proof* read your comment

Cultreevation:Well I agree with your opinion, but have to say, you really should prove read your comments. Like really.
Cultreevation
CultreevationLv10

Well you got me there.... Still my point still stays true.

saad_alhilali:Lol you should *proof* read your comment
NumbLove
NumbLoveLv5

If you want to criticize something, can you first do something with youre Grammer? Cause it's horrendous and makes you sound foolish.

suckmypigtails
suckmypigtailsLv2

If you want to criticize someone's grammar, can you first do something about your own? 'Cause it's pretty bad and makes you sound foolish.

NumbLove:If you want to criticize something, can you first do something with youre Grammer? Cause it's horrendous and makes you sound foolish.
NumbLove
NumbLoveLv5

Hmm yours sound much better...thanks

suckmypigtails:If you want to criticize someone's grammar, can you first do something about your own? 'Cause it's pretty bad and makes you sound foolish.
Nonso_Egbo
Nonso_EgboLv3

Why are there always this kind of people, if u don't like the book, don't read it

Sulov_Adhikari
Sulov_AdhikariLv13

why criticizing need to anything with grammar. If your points are correct and thoughtful then its fine. We don't have to be grammatically correct to criticize. He isn't even criticizing authors grammar.

NumbLove:If you want to criticize something, can you first do something with youre Grammer? Cause it's horrendous and makes you sound foolish.
Sulov_Adhikari
Sulov_AdhikariLv13

review section is made to give review and he is excatly doing the same.

Nonso_Egbo:Why are there always this kind of people, if u don't like the book, don't read it
OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.

OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.

SoberanoSinNombre
SoberanoSinNombreLv5

He dont understand.

OrdealOfMc:Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.
Hakkira
HakkiraLv14

I think if you treat bith the character Harry and the world of Westeros in this novel as being an alternative universe that is different from the Canon you will gain more enjoyment 😉 at least that is what made me enjoy this story but each to their own 👍

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Why are there always this kind of people? If you don’t like the reviews don’t read them 😂.

Nonso_Egbo:Why are there always this kind of people, if u don't like the book, don't read it
Cultreevation
CultreevationLv10

Gods .... please On the one hand I am proud to get everything corrected here. On the other hand.... some of those misspellings are bad! And everybody should try his/her best to make reading his/her opinion easy (or in some cases even possible)! Thank you for your attention!

Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

So it's a scam with the same name, but with nothing from the Harry Potter that we know of? Is this wrong?

Hakkira:I think if you treat bith the character Harry and the world of Westeros in this novel as being an alternative universe that is different from the Canon you will gain more enjoyment 😉 at least that is what made me enjoy this story but each to their own 👍
Hakkira
HakkiraLv14

Doesn't matter anymore since this has been dropped for a long time...😅 😂

Darwin111111:So it's a scam with the same name, but with nothing from the Harry Potter that we know of? Is this wrong?
bryan_lopez_reolid
bryan_lopez_reolidLv4

Es una gran novela El autor sabe lo que hace Me da pena que no continúe la historia Está novela no es de magia como el primer comentador ha comentando tontamente Está novela trata sobre Harry viajando al mundo de juego de tronos y no tiene nada que ver con Harry Potter World Este comentador tonto debería ver el sudor que cuesta escribir tantas palabras y una gran historia Quizás el autor lo dejo por comentarios Irresponsables como estos comentadores tontos Deberíamos hacer que ellos escribieran y luego los criticamos hacer luego que dicen ellos

Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

Encanto, si no te gustan las críticas, no mires la sección de críticas que para eso está.

bryan_lopez_reolid:Es una gran novela El autor sabe lo que hace Me da pena que no continúe la historia Está novela no es de magia como el primer comentador ha comentando tontamente Está novela trata sobre Harry viajando al mundo de juego de tronos y no tiene nada que ver con Harry Potter World Este comentador tonto debería ver el sudor que cuesta escribir tantas palabras y una gran historia Quizás el autor lo dejo por comentarios Irresponsables como estos comentadores tontos Deberíamos hacer que ellos escribieran y luego los criticamos hacer luego que dicen ellos
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