Its not Harry Poter we know . Its not world Got we know. Autor try make somthing magical but he fail. Charakters have no soul like wood pupets. They not funyy . Mc dont have magic from HP . He weak but can do anything what autor can think. to big plot armor. Mc why HP?? better give Mc random name random guy from earth....
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LIKEwhy criticizing need to anything with grammar. If your points are correct and thoughtful then its fine. We don't have to be grammatically correct to criticize. He isn't even criticizing authors grammar.
NumbLove:If you want to criticize something, can you first do something with youre Grammer? Cause it's horrendous and makes you sound foolish.
Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.
Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.
He dont understand.
OrdealOfMc:Not true. Harry here is OC, meaning with a different personality. Author explained why that was, quite thoroughly actually. He uses his magic a lot more later into the story, and anyways, this stories point isn't the use of magic, but political movements and army building, which is done right here. Of course, there are a couple of hiccups along the way, where the plot and given informations don't make sense, but overall, this is a good story, with an OC harry, who isn't afraid to dirty his hands to get the job done.
So it's a scam with the same name, but with nothing from the Harry Potter that we know of? Is this wrong?
Hakkira:I think if you treat bith the character Harry and the world of Westeros in this novel as being an alternative universe that is different from the Canon you will gain more enjoyment 😉 at least that is what made me enjoy this story but each to their own 👍
Es una gran novela El autor sabe lo que hace Me da pena que no continúe la historia Está novela no es de magia como el primer comentador ha comentando tontamente Está novela trata sobre Harry viajando al mundo de juego de tronos y no tiene nada que ver con Harry Potter World Este comentador tonto debería ver el sudor que cuesta escribir tantas palabras y una gran historia Quizás el autor lo dejo por comentarios Irresponsables como estos comentadores tontos Deberíamos hacer que ellos escribieran y luego los criticamos hacer luego que dicen ellos
Encanto, si no te gustan las críticas, no mires la sección de críticas que para eso está.
bryan_lopez_reolid:Es una gran novela El autor sabe lo que hace Me da pena que no continúe la historia Está novela no es de magia como el primer comentador ha comentando tontamente Está novela trata sobre Harry viajando al mundo de juego de tronos y no tiene nada que ver con Harry Potter World Este comentador tonto debería ver el sudor que cuesta escribir tantas palabras y una gran historia Quizás el autor lo dejo por comentarios Irresponsables como estos comentadores tontos Deberíamos hacer que ellos escribieran y luego los criticamos hacer luego que dicen ellos