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callumdunn1
callumdunn1Lv44yr
2020-06-12 02:37

It’s good but my main problem with it is the skipping he will say he’s going to some faraway place in one chapter and in the next he’ll already be back you don’t see him going there and you don’t see him there he’s just back and it happens all the time and with everything I hope the author can work on this problem.

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The skipping problem has improved a bit so that’s good

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