Ashborn2271

So firstly I read till chp 11 where he becomes the adopted son of stark. The whole story until chp11 had no development, he has both draig and Albion as sacred gears hes stronger then captain America but is an orphan he bacsically does no Traning until chp 11, he joins a restraunt where Parker works who identifies him on their first meeting as a superhuman and tells everyone else, the mc like to take punches, since then shield is following him and then shows up the x men because tony stark visits the restaurant because Peter told him, then instead of taking money from gangsters or knowing any sort of magic, he’ basically a stronger human that it nothing dxd here never seen him use any dxd power or do something worthwhile, unti chp11 it’s not worth it for me good luck author san

Friends with benefit

Harry should leave a message in each safe house, saying “ Tom I have taken this money away for the greater good, sincerely your favourite teacher.” APWBD

Still he needs 1000 point to upgrade from f rank meaning 1 point a day equals to 1000 days for the lowest rank

Is there a difference in this and the mtl fic, doesn’t seem like there is any same story plot and charecter, next she’s going to act as Jorel did nothing wrong and get killed, question is author are u copying this if so plz tell because I came here hoping it would be different from the original mtl novel

Author san isnt this a mtl as far as I know there is one similar to this, so question is what is the difference or does it even have a difference

His ability is gift every month unique skills which he can choose and specify a type off, he runs away from Gotham, okay but to study and later enlist in the army, my god what a way to ruin things, he wants to hide from everyone but joining the military is to help people when he earns around 500 million in 1 month yup the mc is very stupid and too OP I wouldnt recommend’ this to anyone looking for a gradualally getting powerful mc, the whole joining the military was a waste of time, the mc seems to waste time when he knows he’s in DC seriously what will school and military do in DC verse. Try at your own risk.

Question is will u continue this beyond the doll gamer fic or not??

Honestly if I were him I would shout out to haunter about Agatha’s plan for it let’s see what she can do about it. Sorry author the whole fic is going down for me, I really did like the idea of EM but the charecter know is just plain stupid

It’ all over the place there is no sense in the plot no understanding of the mcs ability and skills to random, theres no planning charecter is fake as hell, act stupid and most of the reviews are being rewritten by same people more then 10 times uhhhh wouldn’t recommend this to anyone author you need to restart this from the beginning it doesn’t make much sense.