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Hit1903
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2021-07-16 23:40

if anyone has the next 100 chapters, upload them somewhere so that the author gets what he deserves. I mean I don't get how he says one thing and does another. If he was truthful from the start, I wouldn't had any problems with him but he got greedy and stopped uploading. And I am not willing to spend my hard earned money on a story that is getting dragged to meet the plot. Still I would like to know the read till the end.

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ShuYme
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Plus its illegal to make a profit of fanfics. Author stole characters and a world from legitimate authors and shouldnt Make money of it, its fine if its just for fun but it becomes a crime when the author charges money for something he doesnt own the rights to. Hopefully someone reports him or smt

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