Ballad of the Crows

Good story and good progression. I like that the Protagonist and Antagonist both have the same advantage when it comes to future knowledge of the world their in. The MC doesn't get Op too quickly which is another thing I like. In my opinion when a character becomes to powerful that no threat could hurt them the story loses it's excitement. There's a reason why Dragon Ball is so popular. That being said the only problem I have with the story are the typos. There are times where the 'she' and 'her' are used to describe a male and vice versa or sometimes the wrong character name is used during dialogue. Other than that great story 👍👍👍

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i'm not a big fan of other people who are reincarnted in the same story fxnxffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffxvxcvdxnxfncvbcfgmfvbccg,gvnbcbcbcn

Has potential I'm looking forward for new updates keep up the good work (fill for word count) and the other is the best way to get a hold of you and get you to

69 chapters hehehehehehehehehehehe very funn and very cultured if you know what I mean and I hope you know what I mean and if you don’t your probably not old enough to be on the app

Dropped when they met crocus (chapter 8) and my brain got constant damage because of gramma and i couldn't take it anymore. If only author wasn't lazy bun and edited those chapters, then it might be good ff, but here we got a torture device instead of entertainment.

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This story has a good very potent it seems to me a good start not too hasty or too slow, and from what I read it promises a lot just wait and see how it goes[img = recomendar]

Sadly I had to drop it the grammar was horrible

Good story so far, at least better than many but the grammar is below average, author is consistent on making every female character into a male she to he, her to him and even sister to brother (author is blaming WN for the grammar, I've seen your comments bro you ain't fooling anyone lol no offense). Anyways it is good, would recommend it to pass time with.

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Amazing! This story is just for something that I did search for months, I love the characters you added, even tho I don’t like mha, you added a good character for One Piece verse, Dabi! Keep going, also fix your grammar when saying “he” or “she” GOOD LUCK!

This story has a good very potent it seems to me a good start not too hasty or too slow, and from what I read it promises a lot just wait and see how it goes[img = recomendar]

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saya mengerti kenapa novelmu sepi penulis, itu karna kualitas tulisanmu dan pengembangan ceritanya yang buruk dan tidak komplit, tidak menggambarkan kekuatan MC dengan Menyeluruh, seperti berapa jumlah cakra yang dimiliki MC dan juga pengembangan ceritanya yang aneh, terutama dari segi percakapannya yang agak membosankan dan aneh, menurutku ini bukan novel tapi hanya percakapan antara tokoh/orang..

it is okay, but he doesnt do anything very realistic, from the way characters introduce themselves to the fact that he isnt very good at pacing the story (my opinions) i also dont like how he stole aces fruit and called mc uchiha instead of otsutsuki.

i don't know how i read this story but the solutions to all the problems in the whole story seems to be killing. though i get the MC is anti-protagonist but he kills everyone who he doesn't seem to fit his plan. the initial part was nice but the later half was not so good. so sorry this story couldn't click with me

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I see the start of the story is great and hoping that it gets better over time (/≧◇≦＼)(*^o^)／＼(^-^*)(*μ_μ)♪so please do continue the story since the dew chapters has been really entertaining!