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Hizu
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2021-10-28 16:11

Amazing! This story is just for something that I did search for months, I love the characters you added, even tho I don’t like mha, you added a good character for One Piece verse, Dabi! Keep going, also fix your grammar when saying “he” or “she” GOOD LUCK!

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deimospendragon
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I am learning the language from 0 that is the reason why there are so many grammatical errors for "he" "she".

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