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The story is okay. I thought the ability of the mc was interesting and i like the interpretation of the family dynamics with the Zoldyck family. My biggest issue with this story is the translation. It feels like the translation is purely AI and because of that or because of an issue with the prompts used the AI messes up the story. Wrong names are used for Nen categories or the wrong name is used for the Nen beast and they're moves or the way a conversation plays out doesn't make sense. For example Raiken is used in place of Baki Hanma or someone that was previously described as a Manipulator is now being described as an Emitter, Sometimes Zeno would say things that he shoudln't have known things like that. It's only when you read the raw or compare to translations from other sites that the story kinda make sense. Don't depend purely on AI for translation or at least make sure you type in the AI prompt that the translation should not be structurally altered or edited

Is this a mistranslation? Because in the raw it says Baki Hanma

Idk if it's too late to ask this or if somebody else can answer me, but first of all, how was Phir se able to so accurately hit Mc's ship from such a long distance? Does he have some kind of thinker power? Secondly, how was Phir se light attack able to hit Mc's ship so quickly? At that distance it would take light over 2 hour to reach Uranus from earth and since powers don't work past the moon he couldn't have teleprorted the attack to the ship. The mc should've had a lot of time to react to an attack that would take over 2 hours to reach his ship

Does anybody know the RAW for this fic? ..................................................................................................................

Same

If you have to ask then that's a good sign

I keep forgetting that these students aren't kids. The academy is more like a college/University than a high school