A Reincarnator's Wish in Danmachi(Re-Writing in Progress)

At first, I thought this had to be dropped. I was desperate as my thoughts wandered in the night. I wanted to know if this had enough potential to keep me, so I continued to read non-stop until it started to become better around CH 62. Right now, at CH130, I like it, so, I'll be sticking around this novel, hoping it would maintain its good quality, even though the first chapters are difficult to 'swallow'. My advice is, as a reader, to give it a try and to endure the first parts that may seem out of place, or nonsense, as, the more you read, the more you'll understand about the story. I'm not what you can consider a fan, but I just enjoy the interactions between characters. Writing Quality: It's average for an 'original', and good for a fan-fiction. I'm on this app from a few weeks, so I may be wrong, but for me, it's readable in English. Towards last chapters, it improves, so I hope author would fix first chapters as well. Stability of Updates: For what I can see, the Author's updating daily, and he writes 2000 words a day, which is pretty good. Story Development: Slow, but well-made. I understand that there are things to talk about, and I found out that I enjoy slow development. If you would like to see a novel where at CH100 you'll be right at the end, you shouldn't read this at all. Character Design: It's a symbolic 4 stars, but I chose to put 5 stars as well. The characters(aside from Original Characters) aren't originals, but, Author has the ability to use them at will, to make them 'evolve' throughout the story, which is something I like as, from the few other fanfics I read, I could see characters completely change or their gender changed from male to female, as well as the other way around, and I hate that stuff. So, I decided to put 5 stars as the characters feels like the original novel, and as they gradually evolve, they 'don't forget' who they were before. World Background: Again, another symbolic 4 stars. Why? Because the World isn't Author's own world, but, differently from other fan-fictions, as the Character Design point, Author is just able to make everything work. I'm not an expert with reviews, I just saw someone in another novel rate everything from his own perspective, so, I decided to do the same. Why? Because I choose to believe that this story will be really fun, and good to read. If you're still undecided, I can only add that the only thing you have to do, is to prepare yourself to read something you will call 'nonsense' but that will be explained later, and you'll be just fine. I said everything I had to say, peace.

Its interesting and the grammar is good..BUT the structure is ****ed up...make the paragraphs smaller...plus so far theres no actual story despite large chps...and you know just saying...the MC has a ****ty personality...do change this.... suggestion; OP MC...smart and not some perverted idiot...perverted MCs are always weird to read..that **** only works in manga and anime..build the damn romance and do keep the harem small..also pls no issei type MC that goes around *****ing about strength and stealing wives. well...I said my piece,..goodshow and goodluck

I'll write this review for all the people that just say nonsense on this novel, the Author is becoming better and better to my point of view, just saying everything doesn't make sense or trashing his works makes me feel sick. I suggest you to read the novel and, if you feel there is nonsense, bear it and continue to read, If don't, then drop this novel and don't talk sh*t on him like this. You see everyday the ****ty novels that has a grammar that isn't even english, you understand he just started. And I'll say it, for my opinion, this novel is way underrated. With people just seeing the bad in everything. I feel disgusted by such a community. If you want read the novel and continue it because you will enjoy it.

First of all I don't mean to be mean to this novel. This is my honest review about the Novel. - The writing quality is average - Update is O.K I guess - The story is rather shallow in first few chapter doesn't know about 10 and beyond. I simply dropped it at chapter 9. The reason I dropped reading this novel because MC which I will explain it on next segment. - Character : Now this is the real deal . I warn you oh potential reader, you might feel yourself really frustrated on how MC mentality. MC mentality is like women changing clothes, fast and keep changing. To sum up MC is childish --> retard -->> mental breakdown + mental handicapped (almost) -->> happy go lucky -->> Asshole+retard. -World background , well it's standard Danmachi background without much description but yeah simple. Once again, please prepare yourself when reading the first 10 chapters. Some of you would like this novel , some of you would definitely dislike it and the rest here for passing time.

Mediocre at best. A good concept that was poorly delivered, liked the beginning yet it only went downhill from there. The focus at some point shifted from getting stronger to just character interactions. The romance is mediocre, not anything special and just feels extremely restrictive. Extremely innocent too, to the point of even having their relationship controlled because of it. Not only that, the mc is weak. Around 100 chapters in he's still lvl2 despite having a system, that just shows a lack of effort. I don't have the patience for some 'self-discovery' Bs for him to finally stop sitting on his arse and actually try to get stronger. The action is mediocre and barely present, something that shouldn't be the case considering he gets stronger by killing monsters. It just seems like a mess, the focus flip flops and the Mc is just plain annoying. This is just a bootlegged EPIC copy with less everything.

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His leveling is so slow -_- i don't hate slow Pace but your leveling is so slow and now he decide to become blacksmith ??? When will he lvl up? At chapter 300??? The start of the story is good ... He has motivation to become stronger but now? Where did his motivation go? I don't understand mc motivation to become blacksmith when the MC have system that can buy every godly item in there and he have a universe that want him dead if he dosn't become stronger and still decide to become blacksmith ... And when he know he is not stronger than his wife he still dosn't want to become stronger than her -_- sure he can hide behind his wife tail for now , but there is many ***** out there that want him death comeon man slow pace and become dumb to threat is idiocity , the threat he knows but ignores is foolishness . I like the story at the beginning but cant have motivation to continue now because there is so many thing he can do to become stronger but ignore it just to fulfill his desire ( why save lili i hate her , better if u save haruhime his skill is op )

So I'm at chapter 120 and I just can't help but think this novel is actually drama fanfic with some action sprinkled in. Then there's the MCs personality which is absolutely horrible and annoying. The author also likes to add stuff that may seem useless now but comes in later. The problem I have with this is that he just does it so much it takes away from expanding the current ideas he put forth. Not only that but the MCs' power advances at the pace of a brain dead snail. And then now he wants to learn blacksmithing which will push his training even more back. So all in all this novel is a straight 2.6

Hello, here is my review on a novel I had high expectations on after the first few chapters, which I am sad to say dropped more and more after the reading continues. I really tried and forced myself through the last chapters, but I think that’s it for me... I just can’t read anymore of this retarded MC, what a waste... You started the story so good and than you let the character develop in a way that just doesn’t make sense, with all the bull**** about enjoying a ‚normal‘ life etc, when in fact there was practically no need to ever be normal or have normal restrictions if he is on his way to become a god. His abilities and more than that his system grants him power and opportunity, that any normal human for the fact would try too use to its utmost potential, while he just acts plain stupid and ignores this massive advantage... Also the countless repetitions of people basically having the same conversations over several chapters was just a grueling experience. The MC overlooking obvious flaws on his part, could have been explained by the simple fact that it is hard to judge yourself objectively, but Light(System Guide/Soul who manages the System) - a being literally created only to guide him - overlooking flaws on his part or simply not guiding him too use his resources in the most optimal and obvious way, hast basically no grounds to explain itself. Which only means that the authors contradicts the very concept he established this story on for reasons I simply can’t understand. It is really a shame that you took the most interesting parts of the story and bury them under countless ‚slice-of-life‘-like chapters which have no real relevance to the story and the constant dropping of the MC appeal for reasons I can’t figure out, somehow took all my motivation to read even one more sentence.

Well, the grammar is good and all. And there's the good chapter update. But I can't help but be ticked off by the MC's pathetic mentality. I guess, it can't be helped if he was new to all of this. But, breaking down just because of a few words. Yes, the way he respond to Light really destroyed my patience. The people of Uruk were said thay if they were to fight they will die no matter what they do and they still fought. Leonidas was sent an oracle by the gods that he will not return alive and he still fought. Illya experienced all of that but still strengthened her resolve to fight. Emiya Shirou who just admire Kiritsugu sent himself to hell to helo others. Compared to them, who was struck by the cruel reality, and breaking is justified. But, just by imagining? Ugh, no matter how you imagine you cannot break down. Even those who break down due to nightmares needs horrifying experience to have those nightmares. But him? Even, Yun Che took almost 1000+ chapters to have a mental break down, you know.

The grammar is really something in this novel, updates are stable and Author seems really to care about this story so i am expecting something good from this. I want Hephaestus and Tsubaki in the Harem, it would be the best. Please Author, don't drop this and start make some fight because i want to see real fights.

Is this just going to be a slice of life now? Just remove the action tag if he fights like every 50 chapters. The romance is so bad too, it feels more like kids dating rather than teenagers, it's just weird. There's been almost no progression since the story has been 90% romance and 10% slice of life. This is just a bad copy of epic at this point.

I was reading the story nicely and I liked it a lot, but suddenly there was an unnecessary mental problem in the main character.If this were not an issue I could continue reading but it left bad taste in my mouth.

I feel like this is just becoming a cheap copy of infinite cosmos.. Or maybe it was that from the start. Same broken mc who can't think for himself, next time someone tries to write a fanfic for Danmachi I hope the mc is someone who can think for himself and not cry to mama every time something goes wrong.

劇透

It's interesting to see what will Author will do with this story because i feel like it has a lot of potential because the grammar is really good for a fan-fic, there is the MC, at the moment is mentally unstable and i would like him to be more mature for his 18 years old of age but Author said that Ethan will actually improve so i'm looking forward for it. From the stability of updates, up until now, Author is updating daily as he said but sometimes he will even post 2 chap which is good... So, even if the chapters are still 10 i think there will be a good novel in the future so i wanted to secure the spot of one of the first reviewers for myself. :D Keep up the good work Author-san so i can be proud of my comment

If you want to know how stupid the story can get and how contradicting the Mc can be then this is a story for you. Writing quality is good, can’t say anything about it. I don’t know about stability so I gave 5 Story development, now here we go. The story with nice potential like other hundred of similar ones in Danmachi world. But really nothing special. Would be good if author would keep it on logic level but the behavior in the story is so fake and the storyline is just overflowing with stupidity. Mc gets the godes to sleep with him after 5 minutes conversation on their first time meeting. The Mc wants to join her family but decides to go with Loki and there is no explanation why! Well like most shiit in this story it “works because it works” Would not recommend it to anyone who actually looks for something interesting.

For many this novel will be a love hate relationship. The MC is powerful, popular, and blessed with opportunities. The writing quality is decent and the author does an alright job with the setting. But the MC’s character is just all over the place and asking ‘why?’ will often result in incomplete or frustrating answers. After reading 61 chapters I could no longer continue. The irrationality that consistently occurs to move forward the plot is not always glaring but it will irk many people. While I very much do not like the MC acting like a spoiled child with mental problems I can accept it as he is a spoiled child with mental problems. However, the entire world acting immature/irrational alongside him just doesn’t work in the chosen setting of Danmachi. Overall, this novel feels frustrating and hollow. I want to like it and I want to continue further but at this point the only thing endearing me to the novel is it’s setting in Danmachi, not the novel itself. Especially when the MC is an emo version of Issei from DxD.

劇透

Quite like the story development and mc, although in the start a bit odd but shows himself smart when getting into problems, quite inteligent, also like how the backstory was added to make it more interesting with his growth.