At first, I thought this had to be dropped. I was desperate as my thoughts wandered in the night. I wanted to know if this had enough potential to keep me, so I continued to read non-stop until it started to become better around CH 62. Right now, at CH130, I like it, so, I'll be sticking around this novel, hoping it would maintain its good quality, even though the first chapters are difficult to 'swallow'. My advice is, as a reader, to give it a try and to endure the first parts that may seem out of place, or nonsense, as, the more you read, the more you'll understand about the story. I'm not what you can consider a fan, but I just enjoy the interactions between characters. Writing Quality: It's average for an 'original', and good for a fan-fiction. I'm on this app from a few weeks, so I may be wrong, but for me, it's readable in English. Towards last chapters, it improves, so I hope author would fix first chapters as well. Stability of Updates: For what I can see, the Author's updating daily, and he writes 2000 words a day, which is pretty good. Story Development: Slow, but well-made. I understand that there are things to talk about, and I found out that I enjoy slow development. If you would like to see a novel where at CH100 you'll be right at the end, you shouldn't read this at all. Character Design: It's a symbolic 4 stars, but I chose to put 5 stars as well. The characters(aside from Original Characters) aren't originals, but, Author has the ability to use them at will, to make them 'evolve' throughout the story, which is something I like as, from the few other fanfics I read, I could see characters completely change or their gender changed from male to female, as well as the other way around, and I hate that stuff. So, I decided to put 5 stars as the characters feels like the original novel, and as they gradually evolve, they 'don't forget' who they were before. World Background: Again, another symbolic 4 stars. Why? Because the World isn't Author's own world, but, differently from other fan-fictions, as the Character Design point, Author is just able to make everything work. I'm not an expert with reviews, I just saw someone in another novel rate everything from his own perspective, so, I decided to do the same. Why? Because I choose to believe that this story will be really fun, and good to read. If you're still undecided, I can only add that the only thing you have to do, is to prepare yourself to read something you will call 'nonsense' but that will be explained later, and you'll be just fine. I said everything I had to say, peace.
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I felt the same. The first part was a bit lacking, but after that part, I didn't even realize I was at the last chapter the Author had released. Thanks for bringing this out, it was really needed.
Yeah, people should read further before complaining.
DeeplyLostInShadow:I felt the same. The first part was a bit lacking, but after that part, I didn't even realize I was at the last chapter the Author had released. Thanks for bringing this out, it was really needed.
you jinxed it
Ill put my trust in you
as much as I want to believe you that it gets better in the 60s, I just can't bring myself to slog through another 50ish chapters of cringe to get to something enjoyable
2k words is not good. Check out (Winds Of Change) that story has chapters with 20k words per chapter and there's currently 177 chapters.one of the chapters had 70,000 words it took me around an hour and 40 minutes to read it.
