At first, I thought this had to be dropped. I was desperate as my thoughts wandered in the night. I wanted to know if this had enough potential to keep me, so I continued to read non-stop until it started to become better around CH 62. Right now, at CH130, I like it, so, I'll be sticking around this novel, hoping it would maintain its good quality, even though the first chapters are difficult to 'swallow'. My advice is, as a reader, to give it a try and to endure the first parts that may seem out of place, or nonsense, as, the more you read, the more you'll understand about the story. I'm not what you can consider a fan, but I just enjoy the interactions between characters. Writing Quality: It's average for an 'original', and good for a fan-fiction. I'm on this app from a few weeks, so I may be wrong, but for me, it's readable in English. Towards last chapters, it improves, so I hope author would fix first chapters as well. Stability of Updates: For what I can see, the Author's updating daily, and he writes 2000 words a day, which is pretty good. Story Development: Slow, but well-made. I understand that there are things to talk about, and I found out that I enjoy slow development. If you would like to see a novel where at CH100 you'll be right at the end, you shouldn't read this at all. Character Design: It's a symbolic 4 stars, but I chose to put 5 stars as well. The characters(aside from Original Characters) aren't originals, but, Author has the ability to use them at will, to make them 'evolve' throughout the story, which is something I like as, from the few other fanfics I read, I could see characters completely change or their gender changed from male to female, as well as the other way around, and I hate that stuff. So, I decided to put 5 stars as the characters feels like the original novel, and as they gradually evolve, they 'don't forget' who they were before. World Background: Again, another symbolic 4 stars. Why? Because the World isn't Author's own world, but, differently from other fan-fictions, as the Character Design point, Author is just able to make everything work. I'm not an expert with reviews, I just saw someone in another novel rate everything from his own perspective, so, I decided to do the same. Why? Because I choose to believe that this story will be really fun, and good to read. If you're still undecided, I can only add that the only thing you have to do, is to prepare yourself to read something you will call 'nonsense' but that will be explained later, and you'll be just fine. I said everything I had to say, peace.

Its interesting and the grammar is good..BUT the structure is ****ed up...make the paragraphs smaller...plus so far theres no actual story despite large chps...and you know just saying...the MC has a ****ty personality...do change this.... suggestion; OP MC...smart and not some perverted idiot...perverted MCs are always weird to read..that **** only works in manga and anime..build the damn romance and do keep the harem small..also pls no issei type MC that goes around *****ing about strength and stealing wives. well...I said my piece,..goodshow and goodluck

I'll write this review for all the people that just say nonsense on this novel, the Author is becoming better and better to my point of view, just saying everything doesn't make sense or trashing his works makes me feel sick. I suggest you to read the novel and, if you feel there is nonsense, bear it and continue to read, If don't, then drop this novel and don't talk sh*t on him like this. You see everyday the ****ty novels that has a grammar that isn't even english, you understand he just started. And I'll say it, for my opinion, this novel is way underrated. With people just seeing the bad in everything. I feel disgusted by such a community. If you want read the novel and continue it because you will enjoy it.

First of all I don't mean to be mean to this novel. This is my honest review about the Novel. - The writing quality is average - Update is O.K I guess - The story is rather shallow in first few chapter doesn't know about 10 and beyond. I simply dropped it at chapter 9. The reason I dropped reading this novel because MC which I will explain it on next segment. - Character : Now this is the real deal . I warn you oh potential reader, you might feel yourself really frustrated on how MC mentality. MC mentality is like women changing clothes, fast and keep changing. To sum up MC is childish --> retard -->> mental breakdown + mental handicapped (almost) -->> happy go lucky -->> Asshole+retard. -World background , well it's standard Danmachi background without much description but yeah simple. Once again, please prepare yourself when reading the first 10 chapters. Some of you would like this novel , some of you would definitely dislike it and the rest here for passing time.

Mediocre at best. A good concept that was poorly delivered, liked the beginning yet it only went downhill from there. The focus at some point shifted from getting stronger to just character interactions. The romance is mediocre, not anything special and just feels extremely restrictive. Extremely innocent too, to the point of even having their relationship controlled because of it. Not only that, the mc is weak. Around 100 chapters in he's still lvl2 despite having a system, that just shows a lack of effort. I don't have the patience for some 'self-discovery' Bs for him to finally stop sitting on his arse and actually try to get stronger. The action is mediocre and barely present, something that shouldn't be the case considering he gets stronger by killing monsters. It just seems like a mess, the focus flip flops and the Mc is just plain annoying. This is just a bootlegged EPIC copy with less everything.

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His leveling is so slow -_- i don't hate slow Pace but your leveling is so slow and now he decide to become blacksmith ??? When will he lvl up? At chapter 300??? The start of the story is good ... He has motivation to become stronger but now? Where did his motivation go? I don't understand mc motivation to become blacksmith when the MC have system that can buy every godly item in there and he have a universe that want him dead if he dosn't become stronger and still decide to become blacksmith ... And when he know he is not stronger than his wife he still dosn't want to become stronger than her -_- sure he can hide behind his wife tail for now , but there is many ***** out there that want him death comeon man slow pace and become dumb to threat is idiocity , the threat he knows but ignores is foolishness . I like the story at the beginning but cant have motivation to continue now because there is so many thing he can do to become stronger but ignore it just to fulfill his desire ( why save lili i hate her , better if u save haruhime his skill is op )

So I'm at chapter 120 and I just can't help but think this novel is actually drama fanfic with some action sprinkled in. Then there's the MCs personality which is absolutely horrible and annoying. The author also likes to add stuff that may seem useless now but comes in later. The problem I have with this is that he just does it so much it takes away from expanding the current ideas he put forth. Not only that but the MCs' power advances at the pace of a brain dead snail. And then now he wants to learn blacksmithing which will push his training even more back. So all in all this novel is a straight 2.6

Well, the grammar is good and all. And there's the good chapter update. But I can't help but be ticked off by the MC's pathetic mentality. I guess, it can't be helped if he was new to all of this. But, breaking down just because of a few words. Yes, the way he respond to Light really destroyed my patience. The people of Uruk were said thay if they were to fight they will die no matter what they do and they still fought. Leonidas was sent an oracle by the gods that he will not return alive and he still fought. Illya experienced all of that but still strengthened her resolve to fight. Emiya Shirou who just admire Kiritsugu sent himself to hell to helo others. Compared to them, who was struck by the cruel reality, and breaking is justified. But, just by imagining? Ugh, no matter how you imagine you cannot break down. Even those who break down due to nightmares needs horrifying experience to have those nightmares. But him? Even, Yun Che took almost 1000+ chapters to have a mental break down, you know.