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My Servant System

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Katherine Zara, a single middle aged office worker, went about her day as she always had; wake up, go to work, come home and read or play games. However, today would be different. Before she left for work, her ex broke into her apartment and killed her. When she woke up, she was given many choices. She could pick her new world, pick her starting point, and pick her system among many other things. And so Katherine decided to become a servant to a villainess. Follow Katherine as she serves her petty, demanding mistress in a world of swords and magic. Additional: The Female Lead (Katherine) will be submissive to her mistress, but will be cold towards others. I plan on having some action, but mainly this will be a story about Katherine serving her mistress and leveling up her system.

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Chapter 1First Time Readers: READ THIS PLEASE!

So, like the title says, if you are just finding this book now, please read this.

The book started as something I didn't really plan on doing; it was just something interesting to do once a week.

Because of that, it starts off in one style and changes after that. Not only because I grew as a writer, but also because I started wanting to truly write something.

Additionally, it is slow. I know that, and a few people have pointed that out. So, if you want instant action, I'm sorry. As of writing this, I am at Chapter 42, and I have a few more chapters before it becomes more action packed. I just want to let you know that it is, in the beginning, slow. I will come back eventually and update this, but as of current it is a novel more about interactions then action.

(EDIT*: I am now at Chapter 102, and here's the rundown; since chapter 42, the story has picked up, with more action and development between characters. Besides that, once I get my contract finalized, I want to have everything from here to chapter 66 free, since that is the first smut chapter. I feel like the chapters between 42 and 66 are different, since that is when the MC grows up and starts truly doing more than you see in the beginning.

Besides that, if you found this and for some reason didn't read the tags or description, this is a Female Lead Novel, is Yuri (Female x Female relationships), and has Futa (Chicks with dicks), so if that isn't your cup of tea, then it was nice of you to even consider reading this. If you can look past that or try something new, I hope you enjoy.)

(EDIT 2*: Now well into the 200's, and here's a few things that keep getting brought up that I feel I need to clarify.

Kat is a pure woman.

There is a Polyamorous Relationship inside the book; not a Harem, but a group of lovers.

I feel like the writing has improved immensely since then, so the older, starting chapters are much different than the newer ones; no, I am not going back to edit them, since to me they will be something I can go back and laugh at in the future, to point and say 'younger me was so dumb~' and display how far I've come.

Anyways, everything I've stated previously still remains, and I do truly hope you give this a shot!)

So, just think of this as a warning of sorts. If you want something to instantly happen, for action, I apologize.

I hope that you can give it a chance!

Thank you, and please now enjoy the story of Katherine Zara!

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UncrownedKing
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(Vague spoilers from up to chapter 700) This is going to be super long, but it isn't really negative and should all be constructive, so buckle up lol. First and foremost, I love some of the fluff bits. I'd even go as far as to say it's one of this novel's strong points. But like you said, there are times where it just feels like nothing is moving forwards, and I think I know why. I think a part of the problem is the pacing. One of the reasons for that is that sometimes, this isn't really treated as only Kat's story. Rather this is Kat, Jahi, Anput and Leone's collective story. Switching to their perspective so often and needing to cover how they progress slows things down a bit because it's almost like you're writing 1 3/4's of a story. There are times when we have several chapters back to back that all take place in the same day just from everyone's pov. Now don't get me wrong, I don't think that's a problem. That's just an objective observation. In fact I'm glad you do it so it doesn't feel like they are just side characters instead of true romantic love interests. Their relationship wouldn't work as well as it does without the insight into them individually. That said, it does slow things down, especially when this story often goes at a pace of only a few days passing at a time. Sometimes even day to day. Basically, I just think there needs to be larger time skips every so often. These girls are supposed to live for hundreds if not thousands of years, so it's kind of wild that not a single one of them is even in the double digits yet. If I'm not mistaken it's only been like, what, three, maybe four months or so since Kat returned from her involuntary sight seeing trip? And yet that was almost 300 chapters ago soon. She left around 270 or so. Spent a few months, at most, away and returned 420. So about 150 chapters to cover a few months. Not too bad, until you consider several years passed before that event until they got to school. And that everything after that all takes place during the same year. I'm not sure an entire year has passed since they got to school and certainly not since they passed their tests. Going by logic at least, a year should have passed, but it doesn't really feel like it. It actually feels like more should have passed by, but the characters make it seem like less actually has. And that leads to my final point. I think you're both making them grow too fast while also trying to prevent them from doing that exact same thing. They're only 8 (at least Leone was confirmed to still be 8) and have only been training for, what, 3 to 4 years now? If I'm not completely remembering things wrong, Kat "woke up" when she was 5, right? So how come after only 3 years are they even remotely close to a knight's level? It just kind of undermines the power level of the entire world, ya know? I get they're all very special in their own ways. Once in a lifetime talents. But 3 years of training, even from the best teachers, really shouldn't have them where they are now. I just feel like that was from a combination of not wanting them to grow too quickly through huge passages of time, but also needing them to be that strong to even progress in the first place. So you're stuck in a place where they are making a lot of progress but no time is actually passing. A bit of a conundrum if you will. Now, I don't have too much in the way of solutions this far into the story but I would recommend just biting the bullet and giving the other characters levels or at least level approximations. Effective levels if you will. This is only because, as it is currently, it's really hard to judge how strong anyone is in this story. We know the peek with the empress, but we don't really know how far away that peek actually is. Kat is making progress but when you don't really have anything to visually compare that with, it feels like it might as well not even matter. When you have her effectively on a similar level to Jahi, then have Jahi constantly sparring with her mother, it just feels like they're already near the top. Even if logically we know how much her mother has to be holding back, without any actual indication, it's hard to place. In fact, due to Chodeva essentially being treated as a plaything by Lady Fenryas just like everyone else, it just makes it feel like they're around the same level. I would recommend giving her someone serious to fight that the girls can't help with to truly show the gap between them and more importantly, how far they all still have to grow. There's a reason most action novels have some kind of ranking system. Cultivation, adventurer ranks, knight ranks, mage tiers, levels, etc. In any case this ran a lot longer than I thought but I hope it helps.

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Words, love those. Simply put; I. Am. Speechless. For the most part! The story is well written, love the writing style, and the characters are very interesting! I love the dynamics and how the author slowly builds up to some plot points. In the beginning, the story is slow, but not filled with useless blabber. The author takes their time easing you into the world, which while it is described pretty vaguely (as of C105) I'll say it has a few interesting concepts. The magic system is just AMAZING! I saw a review stating it was boring, and honestly(not to throw shade), I completely disagree. It is well thought out, unique and has a very interesting premise to it. Overall, it is a breath of fresh air. Now I don't typically indulge in harem novels, and I still haven't because this is a semi-harem novel (or was it a lite-harem? Forgot what the author dubbed it lol) There are only four main lovers, and the mc isn't technically the leader of this pseudo harem, that is also a breath of fresh air. Then there is a small detail, well not so small detail mentioned in one of the earlier chapters, one that makes this novel a bit more unique on web-novel, I won't say what it is(for the author I'll admit it involves humans), and it doesn't really affect the story much, but it's still dope. Okay... so I wasn't speechless, right. Am I missing anything? Oh yeah! Did I mention just how much of a breath of fresh air this novel is. I urge you to read it. It isn't for everyone, and there are minor grammar errors once in a blue moon, but yeah!

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