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Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)

Tác giả: TrinityShock
Eastern Fantasy
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Đọc tiểu thuyết Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED) của tác giả TrinityShock được xuất bản trên WebNovel.George Candra, a nature enthusiast fell from a cliff and found himself awoke in the bottom of a ravine with a ton of skeletons surrounding him.As he tried to climb up, he found out that he have a syst...

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George Candra, a nature enthusiast fell from a cliff and found himself awoke in the bottom of a ravine with a ton of skeletons surrounding him. As he tried to climb up, he found out that he have a system, but it wasn't your usual system. It was... a shop. Yes... a shop. With the coins that he found nearby, he somehow managed to survive in the bottom of the cliff. He even made a house in there, until someone crashed the house and destroyed it... "..." He suddenly felt an urge to just demolish the house he just finished building a moment ago. "WTF... There's a person on the roof." He poked the man and demanded compensation of the house to him, but the man can't seem to understand Indonesian, nor English. "Uhh... Wo.. ai.. ni?" The man's face darkened. ... #DROPPED#

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I'm betting this will go Premium :| I'm stating this now while not many people know yet. Is anyone willing to take the bet? 140 Words huh, well then. I'm scared of primuem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

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I liked this story.. Please continue to write them!!! What i like from this novel is: 1. The minecraft portal and the items that you could by from the shop. It's literally all thing that existed inside real world, games, movies and even anime. 2. When you can't upload, you said it first. Not like other novels, who suddenly didn't upload. Well.. in other words, you did a great job! (P.S. could you add some potions from Harry Potter too?)

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I have only read a few chapters, this type of novel is new to me, but l have enjoyed the story so far. Your story is quite interesting, this the second eastern fantasy novel I am reading.keep up the good work.

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Mantab, saya kasih 5 bintang dan power stone. Lanjutkan tulisannya. Good job, I'm giving 5 stars and power stones. Continue your writing.

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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde. This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.

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So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming 😎😎😎

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